Open Poetry #11 |
Behind the Silken Ties |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Behind the Silken Ties Tonight I cried for you, buried thoughts rising my lips whispering your name, as teardrops stained the satin, that lay against my cheek. If only you could see through my eyes, you would see with clarity, the love I hold that keeps growing, each day in time. You could blindfold me in silken ties and when the nearness of you closes in and your lips seek mine, I would know it is you. I will be the one in the shadows, holding onto your thoughts, as they carry me through the night, cradling me in peace. In my heart, they are stored for safe keeping blindfolded by this love, I close my eyes. Until I can see you again, I am here.... Holding the image of your face within dreams of my mind, anticipating that one special moment, One moment of kiss, that has captured me from the very first, melted my past brushing aside all worries, and froze me in time. Understand, each morning before light breaks I am here, anticipating "till next" a touch from you, the look in your eyes... The kisses from your mouth, the taste of sweet, the reach from your arms, comforting, as my life is still unfolding and less lonely, I become. And as you look into my eyes, you will see the depth of feelings, words that can never be written, but instead remain for you only, behind the silken ties. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing that how some might wear their heart on their sleeve, the love of their life never shall glimpse the light... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
he gets a glimpse every now and then..*s thank you Sunshine ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I loved your poem, you express your feelings in a open and true way, thanks! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you AP and welcome I haven't noticed you before...~softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written as always Wynter...hope your new year will bring lots of happiness ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you ~V~ I don't think it could bring too much more pain so the only direction is up now *s huggzz and I have the same wishes for you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful write Wynter openly marvelous and creative! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes I am a bit too open, but that is me...always has been and at this stage in life, I am not about to change... huggz and thanks E. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned....and with a lot of love. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
To Reach Forward To Tomorrow With Hopeful Dreams Marks The SweetnessReality Well said, your words emotiveinspire The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wynter, if he gets a glimpse every once in a while, he's a lucky man in my book....hope he knows it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You know for a Wynter, you wrote a real warm poem. Loved it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
like Sunshine said Wynter, it's amamzing how some people never see the heart that we wear. . . yours is wonderful. . .like this poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Wynter, You may write like this anytime, for I will surely read them. Nicely, nicely expressed, you romantic you. BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Charisma- I am pleased you enjoyed my words today DreamSeeker- I am always happy to inspire as many on here do the same to me huggzz thank you both ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Balladeer...in my fantasies, he knows it... thank you you are very sweet Seymour- I am a very warm ~Wynter after all I am a Moonchild too *s thank you both ~softsmiles "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THere are many beautiful lines in this poem and a sincere expression of a growing love, such a pleasure to read Liz |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven- I am glad you enjoyed my words..*s Bill -just words from one romantic to another Liz- yes, I am blindfolded in this love... thank you so much *s best wishes for a Happier New Year and lots of warmth in your life. huggzz to all ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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