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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Winter's Prime |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I can remember when The laughter didn't end We'd frolick in the snow The concept of time we didn't know My mind recalls the day We rode snowmobiles across the bay The lake a sheet of ice Nature's beauty was very nice We traveled through the woods Where the tallest firs stood In a clearing we stopped Making a bonfire that popped Then we roasted hot dogs Out in the wilderness over logs They've never tasted as grand As they did on that land I can see the red bridge Up near the steep ridge It takes me to a time When winter was in her prime ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
I love this!!!!!!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lone Wolf, what a vivid, savage winter write. Excellent! Write on, in song Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good to hear this from you. It brings back memories of me peeking out of the window and drinking hot chocolate!!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LoneWolf...every pen has a master or mistress...blessed are we that your pen has you... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I remember those times...fondly ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Who's up for snowman making contests??  Great poem Lone Wolf! passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A sweet poem that will bring memories to us all. Nothing is ever as beautiful or whimsical as it is when we are young. This poem is both sweet in sentiment and also evokes a sad longing, and hits the reader both ways so that they experience both fond happiness and yearning for the past - excellent technique, well that's how it affected me anyway Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Lone Wolf!! Such wonderful memories!! Denise |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You have painted us a vivid picture of some delightful memories. Excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Lone Wolf ... you must live in the same neck of the woods as me. I've had a few very similar journeys ... thank you for bringing back some sweet memories ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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roselee Junior Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 26 |
I love nature and you touched on it with a great poem. |
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roselee Junior Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 26 |
I love nature and you touched on it with a great poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lana . . .Glad you enjoyed. Kethry . . . Thank you. The winter holds some special memories for me. Kathleen . . . I thought I saw you watching!! LOL. They were special times for me. Sunshine . . . Thank you. We are blessed to have YOU. Wynter . . . Were you the one hiding behind that tree? I thought so!! PV . . . We used to always make snow angels on the lake. Too fun!! Melissa . . . I am glad to help you remember my friend. Oh to be young again! As they say, you can never go back. But, the memories remain forever in my heart. Thank you! Denise . . . Thank you! I will cherish them always. EagleOne . . . Glad to share my vision with you. Kit . . . I wish I lived in the woods, but when I was a child I sure got to visit there a lot. It was always a time of fun and family. I am happy to help you remember those days. roselee . . . Nature has always been a passion of mine. I just try to describe the scenes as they play before me. Thanks! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hey, sweet lady~ This reads as a fond page from a photo album. Lovely to be shared. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ What beautiful and stunning images you have woven in this delightful memory....well penned my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah!....yes I know what you mean and the days seemed to last forever with each one filled with a new world of exciting experiences... now I find they go by too fast...or maybe it's that I don't take the time to enjoy them like I should....I just absolutely loved this! It took me back and refreshed my very soul....thank you so very much....ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the imagery inhere...can hear the laughter and the fun....wishing that I was there too.....love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lone Wolf, Im not to keen on snow but this beauty makes me want to go find some, beautifully done, very much loved. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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