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To Seek The Paragon
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To Seek The Paragon |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH 
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To Seek The Paragon Upon this mortal plane life passes too soon. Memories echo the sins of countless passages. Time travels corridors of what could have been. Decisions made, alter the path of destinies. Corridors converge only to split, each life altering the flow. To seek the paragon offers only paradox. The past can not be changed only remembered. What we learn may shape the future. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What we learn may shape the future John I really like this line Write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Excellent, John... I've linked you on my site - Hope you don't mind...???.. How presumptuous of me - Let me know if it's not OK...  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very well woven and stated. Yet seeking the paragon may be a way in which to continually improve...as long as one realizes that the paragon will not be reached here on this plane. Enjoyed the read muchly! |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
sounds like shades of SHakespeare in this one, I like |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes I know what you mean...seeking total perfection is seeking a demand on the imperfect demand that inhabit this sphere.. and life has much more to do with reality than perfection...what a weight....well written! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, John! Wise words! Denise |
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