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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Reading Room you never really know how wonderful something looks until you're made to really stop and look at it take the scenery at night when you can't see what's really there you can see anything you can make the trees blue the sky green the houses as big or as small as you want you can imagine anything even the lights of the cities you can make them be Rome or New York or Paris or the lights of home the world is yours to see the lights are yours to gaze at the road is yours to travel and all this just from a short trip where I didn't have to do the driving ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Sven!! Of course when I'm not doing the driving, my knuckles turn white from gripping anything that is grippable...hehehe....I'm not a very good back seat driver...I'm working on it, though! Maybe it would help to try some of your kind of imagining! Denise |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a wonderful scenario. I am seeing palm trees I think, in the middle of this ice and snow. (I hate to drive by the way) Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your wonderful words paint beautiful pictures that I always love to stop and see. Thank you, sweet Sven. Much love to you from me. http://voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very good writing. I can relate having spent many years as father husband and DD. Love and light, Richard |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
brings back great memories of trips to LA in the night...us kids in the back of the wagon, watching the stars pass, then we skirt the hill overlooking LA, and suddenly, all of the stars are at our feet... thank you Sven, for the memory... |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Personally, I'd rather let someone else do the driving as well. Great poem! passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, if you weren't doing the driving, what would you be doing? loved this poem. Btw. I dreamed you wrote a tribute to Sunny1. I even have the words in my head. How's that for back seat driving *laughs* Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Beautiful, as always!! Let your dreams be your vehicle, and let your heart do the driving. When the heart guides you, you never have to stop and ask for directions... Much love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Denise, perhaps it would. . . I know that it helped me. . .  Sandra, now you've got it!! While you're at it, could you imagine a nice beach too?? Karen, always glad to paint for such a wonderful audience. . .thank you my friend. . . much love to you too!! Richard, DD?? LOL Thank you my friend. . . glad that you can relate. . . Sunshine, glad to bring back a memory for you my friend. . . I have those same ones. . . PV, then perhaps you and I should go for a drive!  Thank you my friend. . . Kethry, so THAT'S where those words came from!! THANK YOU!!! You're great my friend. . . Elise, that is so true, and you don't mind getting lost either!!! Much love to you also. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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