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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Challenges Lancelot © 2000 Challenges just keep comin' We just like to keep hummin' Tests in life will continue & each one will be brand new You never know where it may lead It may help or make you bleed Many challenges are rough and tough May not swallow but you may cough It is not easy for us to tell Whether they lead to heaven or hell Be sure what your steps are Be sure not to stop or go far Life may not always be good relay But make it as fun as a fair play. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Bravo, very lovely, good ryhmes. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thank you saxoness. I appreciate your comments. Bilal |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Challenges. They're my addiction.  We learn so much from our experiences both the large and the small. Your poem was well written and it is also inspiring. Angel I am no one if not myself. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Excellent poem Bilal! Yes, life is filled with challenges, but all can be overcomed with love and hope in yourself! Thank you for sharing, soulbrother! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
so true, enjoyed this one. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx a lot for responding Dark Enchantress, Noah (My dear soulbro) and Brian. I really value your comments. Bilal |
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