Open Poetry #11 |
Give me a Reason |
Sunshine
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Give me a Reason So give me a reason to shine and I will give you life and love and reasons to live again and live on in all memory for eternity is yours and another gift you might bring to me is snow ~ more snow and then one more crystal star so that I might bright the world today see I can make the grayest day shine in the love of light if you were to just listen and think 'why, I can give her snow if only in a crystal water ball" I will do the impossible and cause sets of smiles to crease your face with embrace of the warm, warm scene of snow under sunlit beams and melt the sorrow from your face so do not harbor nightmare scenes but glimpse me in those loving dreams and behold me in the dark of night, a vision of tomorrow's light as I shall bring you love 28 December 2000 |
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Balladeer
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I could give a hundred thousand Thoughts for you to shine. You only need to give me one.. By saying you are mine. I would send two hundred thousand Wishes just for you Just to hear you say one time Your love for me was true. I'll bring snow in crystal glass That you can gladly shake If you will tell me that my heart Is one that you won't break. Melt the sorrow from my face Bring your sweet love to me And I will give you cause to shine For all eternity. Well, it's your fault, sunshine...you post such a romantic poem and you're gonna get a romantic response...especially from a flirt! |
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Denise
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Sooooo lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
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'Deer, to garner a compliment from you is one thing, but to get a song sung back is simply another, and now, I'm blushing...so I say...thank you...and you can quit flirting now... Denise...it is so nice to see you around this often...thank you dear!... |
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Poet deVine
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You've 'given me a reason' to say this is wonderful! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
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so do not harbor nightmare scenes but glimpse me in those loving dreams and behold me in the dark of night, a vision of tomorrow's light as I shall bring you love Sunshine, this is absolutely stunning in beauty PoetLady... My thanks 2u for a most delightful read... Coco |
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Sunshine
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Sharon, you know I love it when you pop in for a "Hi!"...thanks!... Coco...when a poet reader takes a line or two from the poem to express back what they saw in the piece is a compliment indeed, thank you for being such a frequent reader!... |
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