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Startime
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0 posted 2000-11-30 09:23 AM


In My Back Pocket
Karen Torbiak
2000

You’d never guess to see me
that I keep on safely hidden
but always too close for comfort
He makes sure I’ll never be free

I tried to keep him under lock and key
but he throws such a fit
enough to get the neighbors in a tizzy
So I have to let him out you see

He works hard to get me in a mess
causing trouble everywhere I go
bring stares and anger in my direction
With loud words to make me confess

He is such a little fellow you’d think he’d do no harm
but you should heart the jokes he tells
all to make you hurt and angry
How I wish I had control of him maybe some magic charm

He only stands three inches high
and likes the free ride he gets
as I carry him around the town
I watch the glowing wicked gleam in his eye

He whispers to me the fun of sin
telling me there is no one to know
and he would never tell a soul
But I know with him I’ll never win

He tells me its just to have some fun
no one will ever be hurt
just some wild oats to sow
I am sure I’m not the only one

He smiles and says we’ll party tell dawn
flirt with all the cute men
take one home to have some fun
Then forget about him when he’s gone

He knows when I am lonely I can see him wink
then tell me to just listen to him
and I’ll feel right as rain
Sometimes I start to lean in close then I’ll have to blink

I guess I am just stuck with him
tempting me both day and night
to stray away from all I know
And gently lead me into sin

How I wish I could put him in a chest and very tightly lock it
I’d never have to hear his taunts again
or feel tempted to do the things he says
This silly, wicked little IMP I keep deep in My Back Pocket




Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-30 09:29 AM


Very well written!   -SEA
ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-30 09:53 AM


I enjoyed this read very much Karen. That's a funny place to keep the temptation devil...in your back pocket.......I keep mine under my hat so to speak...anyone that says they don't have one is lying!!   good stuff Karen!! I may have commented on your work before but I just realized today who Startime is for some reason I thought it was another one DUH! I'll be alright...write ya later...ethome
Startime
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3 posted 2000-11-30 09:59 AM


Sea
As usual you fill me with pleasure to know that you like to read my work. Thank you so very much.

Eric
Yep he travels in my back pocket and man of man can he get me into trouble. *giggling* I will look forward to your mail, my friend. Take care. Now this star is off searching for some eric poems. Hugs and love to you from me.


Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

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4 posted 2000-12-29 08:05 AM


Use to blame many a game
on my favored little imp
manys the time he'd come by
walking with a gimp...

come with me, he'd say aloud
I could hear him through the crowd
come and play all night long
and to us the night belonged...

now my imp's grown older,
but still so gleefully smiles
when I serve him up a laugh
and we'll walk still many a mile...

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