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carolinehill
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since 2000-12-21
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0 posted 2000-12-28 08:50 PM



siamese
the trampoline grass, slipping, oil through drains,
into unconciousness.
the world falling flat, feather to the warm waters of sleep. all
for me.

i was placing my hand into your head
when
you collapsed into my lap. you
a face blunted and dull of drink, sticky liquor on your lips. no more conversation
                    for us two, scouts in the night,
indian braves!

teepee migration
in summer time of humid heat
and fever and fits of derision and delusion.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
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1 posted 2000-12-28 11:46 PM


feather to the warm waters of sleep...not so sure I understand this one, but love this phrase *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



carolinehill
Junior Member
since 2000-12-21
Posts 14

2 posted 2000-12-28 11:54 PM


thankyou,
it's just, i dunno, sleep is like swimming in  a warm sea.

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