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encre du coeur
Junior Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 15
Florida

0 posted 2000-12-24 09:00 AM



you
are the weakness
that keeps me from
being the strong woman I need to be

you
are the pleasure
that puts the smile on
the face the world is allowed to see

you
are the key
that keeps my heart
locked in the loneliness of doubt

you
are my savior
free me and let my love out

I write with the ink of my heart.

© Copyright 2000 encre du coeur - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-12-24 09:38 AM


Welcome to Passions encre du coeur!  What a lovely first post ... beautiful sentiments and a wonderful flow ... I hope to read more!  

Happy Holidays and Best wishes,
/Kit

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
2 posted 2000-12-24 09:52 AM


A lovely first post! Welcomeand Happy holidays!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2000-12-24 10:08 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Very nice poem. It tells of a heart filled with love and anguish, yet seeking to find inner peace and strength.
Deb  

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-12-24 11:16 AM


Welcome to Passions.......I like your style.....very much!

"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2000-12-25 06:50 PM


I liked this. Welcome to Passions!
Allright! Pretty soon I wont be the new guy anymore!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-12-25 07:06 PM


Welcome to Passions.  Wonderful first post and I will be looking forward to reading more from you.
Breathe~
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
Washington...
7 posted 2000-12-25 07:45 PM


Wonderful expression!...

May you be freed by your pen...

Welcome to Passions....


I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
8 posted 2000-12-25 10:40 PM


Welcome... This is indeed a grand entree to Passions.  You'll find a comfy niche here for sure... Check your email for a special greeting..
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
9 posted 2000-12-25 10:50 PM


Indeed, you are quite Welcome...sit back, relax, read, write, and totally enjoy this, your new home!
Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
10 posted 2000-12-25 10:52 PM


Wonderful piece.  Welcome to Passions!
Trew
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
11 posted 2000-12-26 01:21 AM


Welcome to Passions!
This writing style is one that I really enjoy!  I hope to see more!
All the best!

Trevor.

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
12 posted 2000-12-26 03:53 AM


I love the twist to this poem and the turn of phrases that make it so complete...good stuff!!
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
13 posted 2000-12-26 11:47 AM


Welcome to passions. I hope you stay a while so I can read more of your work.
write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


encre du coeur
Junior Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 15
Florida
14 posted 2000-12-29 01:45 AM


Thank you all for your kindness and for the welcoming greeting card. They are much appreciated.

I write with the ink of my heart.

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