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Winter Snow |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
The moonlight sparkes everywhere Dancing moonbeams all aglow Twinkling stars fall down to see This magic winter wonderland No footprint mars its virgin suface Stretching far as eye can see To those with active imagination The Yukon lies for exploration Can you see the trail is waiting Hear the dogs deep throated bays Can you feel the wind's sharp tingle Snap the whip and speed away The silent night brillantly reflects Feelings of peace and solitude How lovely is the world made new When blanketed by winter snow < !signature--> Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Pepper, and how lovely indeed is a world made new by brilliant poetry such as yours. Laugh long, in song Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Pepper* Watching your poetry grow is a joy....this is so very beautiful...your imagery is absolutely perfect...just like being there watching the scene unfold in my heart and soul...excellent writing~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so beautiful and enjoyable to read. What a lovely image Liz |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you Keth...quite a picture the reality is too  laughs Kind words indeed, BDC...especially from you  Thanks for stopping in and reading, Liz Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very nice, pepper! The "not walked on" snow is definitely a picture of serenity. Enjoyed this!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've painted a lovely scene with your words, Peppermint! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So hand her a brush and she paints it with a pen. Truely lovely scene you have shared with us. Loved the detailed images it left and the flow of the whole poem was terrific to say the least. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Pepper, I adored reading this write of snow that in words you have weaved such beauty so eloquently... Thank you PoetLady for the splendid read, I'll be threading this one as it's one of my favorites by you... Coco |
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