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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2000-12-27 02:32 AM


The moonlight sparkes everywhere
Dancing moonbeams all aglow
Twinkling stars fall down to see
This magic winter wonderland
No footprint mars its virgin suface
Stretching far as eye can see
To those with active imagination
The Yukon lies for exploration
Can you see the trail is waiting
Hear the dogs deep throated bays
Can you feel the wind's sharp tingle
Snap the whip and speed away
The silent night brillantly reflects
Feelings of peace and solitude
How lovely is the world made new
When blanketed by winter snow
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Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley


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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-12-27 06:20 AM


Pepper,
and how lovely indeed is a world made new by brilliant poetry such as yours.
Laugh long, in song
Keth


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-12-27 08:11 AM


Pepper* Watching your poetry grow is a
joy....this is so very beautiful...your
imagery is absolutely perfect...just like
being there watching the scene unfold in my
heart and soul...excellent writing~

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
3 posted 2000-12-27 08:21 AM


This is so beautiful and enjoyable to read.
What a lovely image
Liz

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2000-12-27 10:53 AM


Thank you Keth...quite a picture the reality is too  laughs

Kind words indeed, BDC...especially from you

Thanks for stopping in and reading, Liz

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2000-12-28 08:02 PM


Very nice, pepper!  The "not walked on" snow is definitely a picture of serenity.  Enjoyed this!!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Denise
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6 posted 2000-12-28 09:55 PM


You've painted a lovely scene with your words, Peppermint! I enjoyed this very much!

Denise

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-12-28 11:38 PM


So hand her a brush and she paints it with a pen.  Truely lovely scene you have shared with us.  Loved the detailed images it left and the flow of the whole poem was terrific to say the least.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

8 posted 2000-12-28 11:48 PM



Pepper, I adored reading this write of snow that in words you have weaved such beauty so eloquently...

Thank you PoetLady for the splendid read, I'll be threading this one as it's one of my favorites by you...

Coco

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