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Passions Gallery--Rainydays (rainydays)
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Passions Gallery--Rainydays (rainydays) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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days of sun really aren't her oh sure, they're good for some things but she'd rather have the rain it's not that she's always sad it's just that you can do more with the rain you can splash you can spin you can slide you can run through the rain feel it run across you feel it run with you that's what she likes to be one with the rain to have the water flow through her like blood through her heart the rain gives birth to her words they fall from her pen like the rain from the sky and all we want to do is go out on those Rainydays and play. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh, I am absolutely amazed at the loving way you write about people reaching into their hearts and seeing all the beauty there. Wonderful. This in incredibly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Sven you have done zee poet in question justice. I do like this one yuh |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I have so enjoyed your portraits of these poets....has really made reading their writing so enjoyable! Thank you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so nice to see people who are happiest in their own element, don't you agree? Well done Sven, she will adore this! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
I know. Rain can be so inspiring...the only thing I don't like is that the roads get so slippery and I have to worry about my friends who might be driving places...that sucks...anyway Sven this was a beautiful tribute to someone who writes beautiful poetry. Good work! W.B. I am a disturbed person, and I write about disturbed people. ~Tennessee Williams |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Well done portrait of another of our fellow poets. You really seem to have a talent for bringing out the best in all of us. Nice writing.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Startime, thank you for reading my friend. . . Walt, thanks for that!!! dreamkeeper, I'm glad that you've gone and found the writers that I've been speaking of. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Sunshine, yes it is. . . and isn't that all of us? Happy here in our element of poetry?? WB, thanks a lot. . . I don't like rain for those reasons too, which is why I try not to drive in the rain. . . LW, thanks. . . I hope that this series does bring out the best in all of us. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
nicely done sven |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"oh sure they're good for some things but she'd rather have the rain. It's not that she's always sad it's just that you can do more with the rain." Sven really liked the way you wrote this...she is Rainydays....James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
rainydays....lovely rainy tribute...and you have found the right words to describe her. superb Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, Splash! splish! looks like you know Rainy's niche. Splish! Splash! look's like you're caught in her cache Write on Kethry< !signature--> Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ so then I would say Rainydays and I are twins!  This is beautiful, excellent write. -SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well im not Rainydays but you have penned the reason why i like the rain so much too  |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
(speechless) um, Sven...? does this mean I'm on your mantle now? YOU are swell!! Thanks for this!!Rainy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a lovely poem indeed for our raindays sven.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kitkat, thank you. . . James, thank you my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Charisma, thank you for reading my friend. . . Kethry, thanks!! And I don't even need an umbrella!! SEA, twins?? COOL!!! kaile, thank you. . . rain is nice isn't it?? Victoria, thank you. . . Rainy, yes. . . this means that you're on the mantle. . . LOL Thank you for sharing your words with us and I'm glad that you liked this. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
OK, I'm a little behind here, Like maybe 15 posts or so.... So I'm slow.... Wow Sven, I'm impressed with this Passions Gallery. I see you started this way back when,... I have a lot of catching up to do. This is wonderful! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How appropriate and fitting for this fine poet. Thank you, Sven! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, wowwwwwwww I am speechless at another one of your fantastic writes... Honestly, your talent leaves me in awe... Thank you for the great read PoetFriend... Coco |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Oh, how I love the rain! There's a quiet beauty to the rythem of the drops, that you have captured so eloquently in your writing. May the rain wash away your sorrows, and color the rainbow to your dreams... Much love, Elise |
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