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I Gently Say “I Love You”
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I Gently Say “I Love You” |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I Gently Say “I Love You” I pull my bride ever so closely and hold her ever so firmly, as I gently say “I love you”. I brush my bride’s skin so smooth and I gaze into her eyes of blue, as I gently say “I love you”. I touch my bride upon her cheek to let her know what I seek, as I gently say “I love you”. I kiss my bride’s sweet full lips and taste all of her tenderness, as I gently say “I love you”. I stroke my bride upon her breast and hold her tightly to my chest, as I gently say “I love you”. I caress my bride as we’re descending. She knows the message I am sending, as I gently say “I love you”. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is truly a beautiful poem, my friend, and it would please any bride!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Melton...this is beautiful...quite a marriage of words here. I could use a dose of that--sighs and applause. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is softly romantic, Melton. Beautiful! Denise |
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carolinehill Junior Member
since 2000-12-21
Posts 14 |
wow- my heart is all a flutter! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* incredibly romantic. Well done. Much love to you from me. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Sunny 1, serenity, Irish Rose, dsnyder, carolinehill, startime. Thank you. I was in a romantic mood. My wife of over 30 years is my inspiration. Melton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*Deep sighs, I am swooning over here!* This is an absolutely beautiful dedication to your bride and what makes it even more beautiful is the fact that you are still so much in love with her after 30 years, you're a breath of fresh air - we need more men like you. I wish you the best! Have you shown this to your wife yet? Expect some happy tears! Melissa< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"I Gently Say “I Love You"" I gracefully accept your love. Over thirty years ago I told you, I'd love you, "Forever and a Day." Nothing has changed, except it grows sweeter with each passing year! Your poem has made my day and my life!! Love you, "Forever and a Day" [This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a beautiful exchange of affection A pleasure to read Liz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Had to come back to read this one, and now the tears are just pouring down my face... hugs to you two...this is touching. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic poem Melton...I enjoyed it thoroughly! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melton~ Just the loveliest thoughts between loved ones. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you all very much, especially my "Bride". Melton |
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