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How Is It Should I Love You
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How Is It Should I Love You |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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How Is It Should I Love You Karen Torbiak 2000 How Is It Should I Love You should I write sweet tender words telling how my heart begins to melt painting pictures how I feel writing that I would make you mine with words tell you my design write about eternal love of souls sent to find their match using words to write of love How Is It Should I Love You should I weave a magic spell take you with me into fantasy weave dreams of love for you to see teach you how to dragon fly take you soaring to mountain tops walk with you in magic forest glade watch together fairies as they dance hand in hand find lands of elves How Is It Should I Love You with kisses soft and sweet eyes that alight for you reaching, touching, feeling flesh arms to hold with tenderness whispered words that you are dear holding hand to share the walk stroking cheek that is so soft sharing tender lover’s touch How Is It Should I Love YOU??? Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lovely flow to this piece..I like it a lot.  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just by being yourself, KAren. That would be enough for any man...... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How Is It Should I Love You with kisses soft and sweet eyes that alight for you reaching, touching, feeling flesh arms to hold with tenderness whispered words that you are dear holding hand to share the walk stroking cheek that is so soft sharing tender lover’s touch How Is It Should I Love YOU??? I love this Karen..I have been going back to read those I must have missed..this one is lovely ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beautiful Karen... your asking all the right questions and offering lovely sincere choices  wonderful poetic expressions and imagery love that second verse ... the fantasy weave. well done take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just write more poems like this one Karen. . . and I'll be yours forever. . . wonderful!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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