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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-12-28 10:41 AM



New Born


lake of promises
reflecting colors of love
birth of life become
a natural part of hope
united love in new born

Charisma


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Oh Charisma, this is stunning! Love this   -SEA
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Charisma~
Softly etched ... wonderful thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-12-28 10:52 AM


And so shall the beauty of life and love always continue.  Absolutely lovely my friend just as your heart is.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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4 posted 2000-12-28 11:19 AM


Yes, I agree with them all...just lovely and the picture too *s

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5 posted 2000-12-28 04:40 PM


Sea: I am glad that you love it...

Marge: thank you for the wonderful thoughts.

Mark: yeah you know it too my friend, the beauty of life and love will always continue

wynter: thank you for your kind words, I am glad that you like them both.

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6 posted 2000-12-28 05:19 PM


Charisma--Beautiful Tanka


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7 posted 2000-12-28 11:01 PM


Charisma, this is very beautiful! Just lovely!

Denise

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8 posted 2000-12-28 11:20 PM



Charisma, I truly enjoyed reading this...
Thank you PoetFriend...
Coco

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9 posted 2000-12-29 05:33 PM


poeminister~~~~denise~~~~Coco~~
May I thank you for your kind reply. I am glad that you like this tanka.

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