Open Poetry #11 |
I LIKE IT HERE (First Paradelle) |
2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I LIKE IT HERE (First Paradelle) I LIKE IT HERE AT PASSIONS I LIKE IT HERE AT PASSIONS AND I FOUND MYSELF A HOME AND I FOUND MYSELF A HOME MYSELF AND I FOUND IT A HOME I LIKE, HERE AT PASSIONS SO, WITH DEAR POETRY FRIENDS SO, WITH DEAR POETRY FRIENDS I’M NEVER ALONE I’M NEVER ALONE I’M NEVER ALONE WITH POETRY FRIENDS SO DEAR A HOME WITH LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH A HOME WITH LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH OF MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH OF MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH A HOME WITH MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH OF LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH I LIKE IT HERE WITH DEAR POETRY FRIENDS AT PASSIONS AND A HOME OF LOVE VERSES, BALLADS, AND POEMS OF MYTH WITH MISS MARGE, BALLADEER, AND ELIZABETH I FOUND MYSELF A HOME SO, I’M NEVER ALONE |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Melton - It appears you've done it!!... I'm not sitting here and counting words to validate, but it sure looks right... Isn't masochism fun???.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Anyone who attempts one of these deserves a medal!! Very good, Melton!! Come get your medal!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, Melton~ This is just a bang-up job ! I'll chip in on that medal ! Thank you for inclusion in your verse. If you need Tylenol after doing these paradelle's - I think there are quite a few of us with them on hand ! Great first paradelle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good show Melton ...well done!! Welcome to Passions looking forward to many many more ...take care ethome. |
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