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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2000-12-27 10:21 PM



Dew On The Red Rose.

The tears flow on your red face
Like morning dew on a red rose
Both I touch and kiss passionately
Soothing your pain, being by your side

Time and again sorrow clouds your day
Sending you deep in the throes of dismay
At the end of the day, I will replace
The withered rose, with a fresh one in its place
Straight from the garden you so tenderly love

As you come to grips from your sadness
You need not say sorry with the kindness
Of the love you gave and I treasured
For I knew all along you needed time alone
And somehow you would return to me
Like dew returns to the red rose.




Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2000 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lightning
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1 posted 2000-12-27 10:58 PM


How very, very lovely...I could feel the emotions in this with every line..Absoultely wonderful read... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-12-28 12:53 PM


JD~
Pennings straight from the heart are my favorites ...
~*Marge*~


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Lana
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3 posted 2000-12-29 04:37 PM


can I chill a bottle of wine and turn myself into a rose?
God, these roses get all of the attention
and why did you only get 2 replies., I can fix that, I learned how.  

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-12-29 06:21 PM


how have you touched my heart with this wonderful poem. worth a thread.

thanks for sharing this one.

((hugs))
Charisma

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2000-12-29 07:12 PM


I tried to single out a line or two  but Daniel..I couldn't separate the lines..I will save to read again and again, this is one beautiful poem...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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6 posted 2000-12-30 12:44 PM


Daniel,
beautiful poem and sentiment
write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-12-30 01:32 AM


Hey Daniel...you doing ok babe? This is lovely my friend
ethome
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8 posted 2000-12-30 04:43 AM


Beautiful work Daniel! Just beautiful!
Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2001-01-02 07:36 PM


LadyLightning,
Thank you so very much, love can be very tough.

Marge,
Sorry for the late reply, thank you, yes it is straight from within.

Lana,
Even 1 reply is worth it at Passions.

Charisma,
Thank you my dear, always great to hear from you.

Wynter,
Cheers, I really appreciate your replies.

Kethry,
Thank you all along.

Paula,
Fine, just had to write this one.

Ethome,
Thank you, love your work too.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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