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Dew On The Red Rose
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Dew On The Red Rose |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Dew On The Red Rose. The tears flow on your red face Like morning dew on a red rose Both I touch and kiss passionately Soothing your pain, being by your side Time and again sorrow clouds your day Sending you deep in the throes of dismay At the end of the day, I will replace The withered rose, with a fresh one in its place Straight from the garden you so tenderly love As you come to grips from your sadness You need not say sorry with the kindness Of the love you gave and I treasured For I knew all along you needed time alone And somehow you would return to me Like dew returns to the red rose. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
How very, very lovely...I could feel the emotions in this with every line..Absoultely wonderful read... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ Pennings straight from the heart are my favorites ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
can I chill a bottle of wine and turn myself into a rose? God, these roses get all of the attention and why did you only get 2 replies., I can fix that, I learned how.  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how have you touched my heart with this wonderful poem. worth a thread. thanks for sharing this one. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I tried to single out a line or two but Daniel..I couldn't separate the lines..I will save to read again and again, this is one beautiful poem... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Daniel, beautiful poem and sentiment write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey Daniel...you doing ok babe? This is lovely my friend |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work Daniel! Just beautiful! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
LadyLightning, Thank you so very much, love can be very tough. Marge, Sorry for the late reply, thank you, yes it is straight from within. Lana, Even 1 reply is worth it at Passions. Charisma, Thank you my dear, always great to hear from you. Wynter, Cheers, I really appreciate your replies. Kethry, Thank you all along. Paula, Fine, just had to write this one. Ethome, Thank you, love your work too. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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