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Hear My Call
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Hear My Call |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Hear My Call Listen to the softness as I whisper you name upon the wind blowing I hope you Hear My Call Listen closely to words written from loving heart set on a screen for you that you may Hear My Call Listen for my heart beat will you match my rhythm can you not see the love sent that you Hear My Call Listen to blowing wind sending you my passion asking you to accept my love and Hear My Call I sigh for want of you as we touch so briefly if only in spirit please, dear one, Hear My Call Karen Torbiak© 2000 Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Karen, this is sooo good...How often the call isn't heard...Hope yours is heard soon if you are indeed calling to someone special..I .liked this much...  ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know those feelings, very good Karen.. I wanted to tell you, this morning I noticed your poem again "I Would If I Could"..and then realized I wrote If I Could...I guess between your wonderful thoughts invading my brain and Barbra Striesands song on her Xmas album I was listening to..they combined into a thought pattern that I wrote. I am going back to say you inspired me..on it so as not to cause any confusion...I did the same thing on my "Soft Touch Reigning Inspiration" on another site yesterday..one of my friends below me wrote one titled "Soft Touch"..and I hadn't noticed...different style poems but still..my mind is cloudy lately...sorry, huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nicely done, Startime... Hear your call indeed.... Sometimes we've just got to turn up the volume, though, ya know???... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Lady Lightning Still looking for someone to answer my call. This one sorta wrote itself. *sigh* with my always wanting to write of love things like this just slip out. Thanks, dear one, I am so glad you liked it. Much love to you from me. nakdthoughts *giggling* you have really complimented me by writing with close to the same title. I know that many times I am inspired by words of wonderful poets. Thank you so very much. Much love to you from me. Nan I would really want a man who had the strength to make a move on me rather than my having to shout after him. *sigh* maybe he will hear the call. One never knows. Thanks so much for reading. Much love to you from me. |
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