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Faded Mist (revised) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Listen hear the silence of the eerie hallowed halls. Heavy footsteps echo cause theres no one left to call. Laughter once in triumph rang throughout the happy rooms. Sunshine touched each window pain now nothings left but gloom. Horror struck with swiftest hand two lovers died in vain. Lost to greed of evil hearts whos loves for not but pain. But yet in mists of moon kissed night her hand upon his heart. They stroll the halls of evermore A love that none can part. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
no! wake them up, they haven't loved yet!  < !signature-->"Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
All right, ya lil tease. There's gotta be more to this story than this. C'mon - how far did they go before they were cut short. I wanna know! You've left me needing more, fer cryin' out loud! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn~ There's always a first ! And for the FIRST time - I agree with LongJohn ... shhhh ! This is a hauntingly lovely piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Marilyn. . . haunting and melodic. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great writing, Marilyn. I can feel the gloom, the sadness. Very good writing, indeed. Denise |
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