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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-27 05:45 PM


If I Could...

If I could...
     I would give to you the world
      within my heart...
        I would share with you
          the whole of every part...
            I would kiss away the fears
              that have your hold...
                and warm you with
                  my comfort growing old.
If I could...
     I would take you on a trip
       the milky way...
         rest upon the crescent
           moon in sway...  
            bathe you in my moments
             stardust touched...
               handing you the feel
                 of loving much.
If I could...
      I would keep the pains of life
        from reaching you...
          I would soothe away
            the edges rough, untrue...
              I would live my life forever
                 in your view...
                   with eyes of mine
                     to penetrate your blue.
If I could...
      I would wish to be the one
        to share your dreams...
          to be beside you
            walk along the streams...      
               held, embraced with
                 kisses feeding you...
                    together in both
                       fantasy and true.

If I could...I would answer all your prayers of yesterday
                    fill your heart with wishes of tomorrow
                      and hold you in my arms of today.

~Wynter
*inspired by Startimes poem.."I Would If I Could"...and by Barbra S. and a mind that was soaking them both up *s


  


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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2000-12-27 09:15 PM


Evening Wynter,

This is truly another of your most spendid writings. You do know how to express that soft warm heart that you own.

BC


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-12-28 01:46 AM


Wynter~
You've tucked a lot of beautiful thoughts in this one.
I like it.
~*Marge*~


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2000-12-28 06:39 AM


thank you Bill and Marge...I was thinking  a bit too much yesterday..*s...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-04-22 08:22 PM


just came across this...glad I did

nice write M

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