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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Ask me again.... |
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shinamoon Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 15Daytona Beach, usa |
Ask me again.... Ask me again if I love you and the answer will be the same I can only love you if you will feel the same. Ask me again willl I stay and the answer will be true I will stay for ever if you always do. Ask me again do I need you and the answer will be strong I will need a friend for my whole life long. Ask me again do want you and my answer will always be I'll want you for as long as you want me. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like a fair deal to me... Well said, shina..  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I had to go thru this...gets kind of lonely falling in love all by yourself...so now they must also fall in love with me...ha..ha...if it would only work this way...and soon enough you will see how a friendship is the most important aspect...and love will or will not grow from that friendship but the friendship can survive...James |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
shinamoon your poem tells me you aint no needy girl. great poem i say. |
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shinamoon Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 15Daytona Beach, usa |
thanks for the replies and james it is difficult to fall in love alone seems to happen that way alot for most of us walt definitely not needy been alone and happy with someone and happy either way i will survive but with is better |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
powerful verse and you have just brought me a new perspective on life itself,shina...i always try to give myself, regardless of whether the other person will reciprocate...though sometimes i do get weary doing so... gives me something to think about  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Shinamoon! I think strength is the most attractive quality that one can possess! You've said it well! Denise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions!!!!!!!! Nice poem |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet |
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