navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » Connection Refused
Open Poetry #11
Post A Reply Post New Topic Connection Refused Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-12-27 12:07 PM


Connection refused
So I'm told by my 'puter
Am I doomed to be separate,
with no hope of a suture?

Will my reaching out
Simply reach to the wall
How can I respond
when I can't even call?

Now communication's gone
with connection refused
no reply can I give
and I'm feeling cross, used

Re-establish the link
I cannot now do
The fault isn't in me
The fault is in you

Connection refused
The words go through my head
So I'll stop trying to write
And court real dreams instead.



Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2000-12-27 12:45 PM


Kethry love, this is excellant, as always you are so in tune. And I'd never forgive your 'puter if it denied me access to my smile supplier.
Take care love
                Slushy Mushy
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-12-27 01:00 PM


nothing like a dream Kethry. . .

wonderful from you. . .  

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-12-27 05:26 PM


Courting dreams...

uh-oh...new ideas are forming...

enjoyed this!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-12-27 06:55 PM


Thanks you three mousketeers.
This poem is a true dinks one based on the number of times I've had the error (61) Connection Refused over the last week.

Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Beverley
Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97
England
5 posted 2000-12-27 07:12 PM


The Mouseketeers? I can see I need to come in far more often
great write
I get that too

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » Connection Refused

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary