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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
In the middle of my darkest night, Few things will calm this restless mind; Not many people can diminish the hurt. But you, my Friend, Always know just what to say To distract me from the sorrow. When I hear your words, The anxiety subsides. Your voice is the remedy For the symptoms of my downcast spirit. Nothing reaches me Quite like your promises. Dearest Companion, I am forever indebted to you For all you have done To mend my wounds And speed up my recovery From this believed-to-be-incurable affliction. I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Everyone needs someone like this. I'm hoping this is your reality! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Bravo, snowpants! in the midst of hard times, a few friendly words is the only remedy one could need. Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Irish Rose: you're right! and, yes, it is a part of my reality, and I am truly thankful for this person! thanks!  EagleScorpion: yeah, sometimes it doesn't take much to get us out of what we think is life-shattering. thanks for stopping by! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
You've written a fine "Thank you" to this person. Grab hold and never let go! May you never have to repay your debt... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's always a cure and it comes in many forms but this poem is filled with the cure.. love and friendship and you wrote it so very well......ethome |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Trev: thank you, my friend. I do wish I could do that, you know. ethome: thanks! I appreciate your kind reply! I am glad you liked this!  sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is always nice to have a friend that accepts you and loves you for you and will not turn their back on you when you need them the most. I am happy that you have such a friend to lean on. Wonderful write my friend. So nice to see you posting again. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Mark! It is very nice to have someone to lean on in the hard times. I'm glad you liked this!!  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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