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I've caught you! (revised to, just a joke ya'll, I really have no idea what I'm talking about) |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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I've found you out without a doubt I know that it's you, you can't hide, you two. The poems passed between, you thought had gone unseen. But now I know, 'cause you let it show and I've spilled the beans... no more secrets it seems. You know who you are, the sneaking didn't go far. I won't reveal names, to ruin all the games, But I had to reveal your fling, even if it's a deeper thing. Yes I've found you out without the tiniest of doubt. So I'll be watching you, and you know it's true because well, I think it's sweet, and I hope you eventually meet, so I can say on that day I knew all along, and I was never wrong. (To any one who may take this seriously, please don't! I haven't REALLY found anything out, lol, this is just a joke between friends. So no worries) < !signature--> "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OK, who is having a romance without telling me??? Cute poem, anyway, Saxoness, and good luck to the couple in question. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* it isn't hard at all to know the couple this is written to. I can see that wishes do come true, turning dreams into reality. I wish them both all the happiness true love can offer. Well done, dear one. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ok, who's been spreading rumors about her and I again.... damn and I thought nobody was watching...  oh, you don't mean me.... ok, forget what I said....  cute poem... but I bet you don't know who she is..... na na nana na....lol Parker |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Hee hee hee I have a feeling that this will nail SEVERAL couples on PiP lol "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
I thought this was a friendly place for poetry, I'm beginning to wonder, is it or not? Is any thing I post (and I'm new here) going to be scrutinize...jeez, I get enough of that sh......in real life.... I'll be reading and waiting before I post anything under a microscope. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute! Although I don't have a clue, I'll be keeping an eye out!! Denise |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Lana, I got your email and emailed you back, hopefully that will answer some of your questions. Denise, lol thanks, you do that and see what you find! Isn't it exciting? "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i dont know the couple myself but like denise, will be playing detective... though i wish the best of luck to those two lovebirds |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Saxon lady You are a Detective Emeritus indeed! Who else could have guessed that Balla loves Deer? Especially when one of them is too drunk to care how the other one looks!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is very cute - and very enjoyable for its poetic ambience... It no doubt describes MANY a Passionate Poetic Pair... I'll do just that, though... I'll enjoy it for itself... and I'll let those "pairs" remain unseen... When and if they choose to announce their friendships to us, I'll heartily cheer them on. If they prefer privacy, they'll have my understanding and respect... 'Tis a cute poem... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great poem!!! LOL -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
kaile, I wish them luck too *grin* Sailor, uh oh, I'm tellin! You weren't supposed to say any names! lol good one. Nan, of course we'll let them remain! Whats the fun in spoiling the surprise for everyone? Yeah this is just a little bit of fun on my part, glad you liked it! Sven, thanks! It's not a literary masterpiece, lol, just a bit of lighthearted fun "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
cute!BUT....shhhhhhhhhh..... i don't want to know! ROFL  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... a good guessing game Saxoness, enjoyed both the poem and the mystery! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I nearly skipped this one, but curiosity got the best of me. I don't pay close attention to such, as in who's who, etc. Not having a lot of time online, and there is so much good poetry to read! (love it). I still say, this is a cute poem full of good rhyme. Deb |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
cute, sorry I misunderstood earlier, I guess I'm new, no one takes this stuff seriously! Love it |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lol thanks ya'll, it's nice sometimes to just have a bit of fun "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jeez..did love puppy get out and about again...i keep tellin him to lay low....(he thinks no ones watchin....teehee) LOL! very cute sax  hugs, g< !signature--> "the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'" -unknown [This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lol Thank you, thank you. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Saxoness? It's like the mafia...the less ya know? the safer you are...grins and winks! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Goodness! I can't believe how much banter you got even after your disclaimer. Surely when you say it's just a joke and that you don't know anything...oops, you said you 'didn't find out anything' that you mean what you say, right? Certainly a piece that created less peace and many queries. ;o} |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
'renity, I know! I keep tellin 'em I dunno anything...and yet I still think I'm being followed lol VAS, lol, I have trouble remembering my name sometimes, I don't have time to truly play dectective. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
listen honey, at first I didn't know what this forum was all about. You know, I've only been reading for a week and I've already paired up about oh, a dozen or so folks! Just kidding. But you have to be careful with words, because NOT knowing is more dangerous than knowing, know what I mean. You're a cute kid, you didn't mean any harm..... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lol thanks once again all for the replies. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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