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I Would If I Could
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I Would If I Could |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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I Would If I Could I would if I could touch your eyes with soft lips kissing them closed I would if I could touch your lips with finger tips tracing them gently I would if I could touch your heart with softness given from my heart I would if I could touch your soul with sweetness from spirit freely I would if I could touch you now with passion heat wrapped flowing Karen Torbiak© 2000 Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, Karen, I think we all have a list of things we would do if we could.... very well written, starry one  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You said it all, Karen. I would do all those things too, if I could. Great writing. Happy Holidays Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I loved this one Karen...repeating just makes it that much better *softsmiles* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent, I loved it! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I have to admit that there is one person I have made a list for of things I would like to do if only I could. Wonderful write my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
How did I miss this?? This is simply so sweet...I liked it much..Touched me "right there", yes, I would if I could... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
as I would if I could for him that owns my heart...wonderful poem, I really relate |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Woo! "passion heat wrapped and flowing!" Love this style Karen and all of the verses are so full of heart...once again...ethome |
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