Open Poetry #11 |
Cyber Seas ( for H & C ) |
Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Almost two years ago, even before these forums came into existence, I penned a poem for two very special people to help celebrate their first "real world" meeting. Though linked by virtual passion, they were separated by no less than an ocean (the literal kind), and their first face-to-face was long anticipated. They met, realizing a dream and cementing a love. And then they parted. Life doesn't always give us smooth, straight roads and it is only now, nearly two years and many bumps later, that these two people have at last traversed the curves they were thrown. A few days from now, that ocean will again be crossed. At the end of a very long flight, this time in the opposite direction, two people will again meet and realize their dream. And, once again, I wish them the very best.
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This was a very special time, indeed... and these are two equally special people - both original Passions folk... This was such a wonderful poem, I had to add my two cents as well... You two - Have a totally splendiferous time... Luv ya!!!
ENJOY YOUR TIME TOGETHER, H & C... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Allow me to add my wishes. . . good luck. . . and have fun!!! Remember. . . there are no oceans that are so rough that they cannot be crossed. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Two boats joined in single ship By hearts upon a common trip," This is lovely Ron ... what a wonderful story! Though I do not know who these fortunate people are ... you've captured the anticipation and reunion beautifully through these words. A hearty "Bon Voyage" and happy sailing to them both ... until they meet again soon ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bon Voyage! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool poem Ron ... and Nan... a wonderful send off ... I just love happy endings...thanks for sharing this .. its gives all of us who love someone across cyber distances hope ... its also great to get to read your work for a change ... Add my wishes for sailing off into the sunset to these two. take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I believe this was the first poem I ever read of yours, Ron..it has lost none of its luster... Best wishes to both.................... |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Best wishes to your two friends. What a lovely story! I enjoyed your telling of it. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful gesture, I wish them well. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's wonderful, Ron, thank you for sharing this with us. "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I remember this poem too and I wish the two birds well. Come see us more often! |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem!!! I had no idea it was written for them. And now, today, she leaves to meet him...I pray that this works out and can't wait to hear their happy news if it does!! They deserve this. |
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Denise
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Very lovely poems, Ron and Nan! I wish them the best! Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
At last report, our Passionate couple is about to embark upon the journey of their lifetime... "C" is leaving London this morning to spend the day in a state of sheer apprehensive bliss... and "H" is boarding a plane in the US later today to transport her to England... Don't forget to check in, you two... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron~ this is beautiful! I hope it works out for them........ -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
may I add my best wishes too.... Charisma oh my ....almost forgot to tell you that I love these lovely story.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ron and Nan - My sentiments join yours. Good luck, Heather. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Hi guys Lemme see...I've just gotten him out of the room so I can type this without feeling like such a dork! (not to mention I'm seriously annoyed by this British keyboard!). Our reunion was all that I expected, but really so much more. I realised what true love is. Finally. After 31 years. I have such a short time left now here with him. I have no clue how I will make it on my trip home. *sigh* I have been treated like a princess. His family is wonderful, I think I'll keep the whole lot. We went to a traditional English pub last night on New Year's Eve, danced and drank and suffered this morning lemme tell ya what! But wow can those Brits party! *wink* Later! ~H And to Colin, thanks for showing me what real love is. And for being so patient. I can think of no-one who would have been in your shoes and stayed anywhere near me. Was it worth the wait my love? as always YOUR Heather |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
YES! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, what a wonderful Happy New Year to you both!!!! May the new year continue to bring you MUCH joy and happiness!!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Like Kit I don't know the two people but the story is wonderful and I certainly wish them the very best....and a happy new year!! ethome |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
COOL!!!!!! what a wonderful and daring way to start the new year!! best wishes and...really great poem ron hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL.... Why Colin - I can't recall EVER knowing you to be quite so succinct... BPH to both of you... |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Hi everyone First of all, please accept my apologies for not replying more fully earlier, but (humble bows to Nan) there are times when brevity is called for I would like to thank Ron and Nan for their beautiful tributes to the love I am fortunate enough to share with Heather. Thankyou, also, to all who wished Heather and I good fortune for our all too brief time together. OK, enough preamble I think. Heather and I had a wonderful time with each other. We shared life in all its fullness for ten days and, all in all, the vacation could be described as an overwhelming success Thanks again, everyone for all your kind wishes. Now, why not head over to announcements (if I type them before you read this) and look for posts by Eric Williams and Colin. Oh..... and if you were thinking of heading over to adult.................. A gentleman never tells < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Colin (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No apologies necessary, Colin... I was chuckling about it - but you know that... This is the MOST AWESOME NEWS... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ron I came across this again in the archives. One day I hope to have this printed with your permission on some very special invitations...err..cards..I'm insane..I've decided that. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
good to know the story behind this poem. very romantic with a bumping heart. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
what a wonderful matchmaker experience. Life is good with poems and better with good friends and best when all are happy. I wonder how they are doing now. TM |
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