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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-26 07:30 PM


skyskyskyskyskyskyskyredskyskyskyskyskyskysky
sky                you        orange       makes           sky
sky                are        yellow           up                sky
sky              looking      green         her              sky
sky                at          blue         wonderful         sky
sky               what        indigo       heart             sky
skyskyskyskyskyskyskvioletyskyskyskyskyskysky

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2000-12-26 07:43 PM


All the colors of the rainbow, all directions of the wind, the depth of the oceans, the infinity of the stars, all the love to hold and to be given = Rainbow

I'm sorry to have missed so many of your portraits, but I couldn't keep up. This is lovely, Sven.
Liz

kaile
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2 posted 2000-12-26 08:20 PM


really sven, you never cease to impress me...

gosh, you make poetry seem so fun and funky  

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 12-26-2000).]

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-12-26 10:11 PM


Sven~
Our ~RainbowGirl~ has a heart so full
of the glow of colors you list -
AND
she is the ~pot of gold~
at the end of that lovely palette in the sky.

This is certainly her !
~*Marge*~


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Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-12-26 10:26 PM


Pot
of
Gold
Perfection

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-12-27 01:39 AM


Sven you are so right  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sven
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6 posted 2000-12-27 09:46 PM


Liz, no apologies necessary my friend. . . thank you for your words. . .  

kaile, who says that poetry can't be fun??  Glad that you like. . .

Marge, thank you so much. . . indeed she shines for all of us. . .

Sunshine, thank you. . .  

tracie, thank you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


CocoBaci
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7 posted 2000-12-27 10:58 PM



Sven, this is so exquisite this treasure you have wrote...
I am truly impressed PoetFriend...
Coco


RainbowGirl
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8 posted 2001-01-01 08:32 AM


Thank you sweetheart, it's lovely... and I love 'Candles' and all the other Gallery poems...they're a wonderful read..

Thank you and Happy New Year

HUGS

ethome
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9 posted 2001-01-01 08:35 AM


Very clever Sven I love the link to the handle.....very well done my friend....ethome
Kethry
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10 posted 2001-01-01 02:36 PM


Sven,
it's everything it should be
Keth


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Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2001-01-01 02:43 PM


What a unique and wonderful way to bring in the rainbow that is reflected in her heart ... very nice Sven ... hugs to you both,  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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