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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Commiseration Non but I can see her beauty They, a normal lovely. She that caught my essence being Through an inner seeing. Plain that turned to beauties blind Is but a state of mind But magic happens when we meet And love is the receipt. The web is commiseration Touch and visitation And laurels fall at beck and call That grow you ten foot tall. And every morsel fills your aim Lighting strikes setting flame. Within wild honey of amour In fields of evermore. It is the substance of your goal And the copulate of your soul. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'She that caught my essence being Through and inner seeing.' That's how it all starts, doesn't it? This is beautiful, Seymour! Denise |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The web is commiseration Touch and visitation And laurels fall at beck and call That grow you ten foot tall. wow a very beautiful poem, sigh tender words and wonderful images It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"the web is commiseraton" how true, how true. . . excellent Sir. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well penned. enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the read and beautiful. Brian, Thank you for the WOW. Sven, Thank you my friend for the excellent. Mike, Appreciate the well penned. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in thy beauty of your pen you weave the way to which you wend... always shall I look for thee here within the heart of me... and this is what you do to my mind... thank you Sy... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I was going to copy only the lines I liked best which I rarely do anyway but found out that I loved each and every one of them. SO here they are. Plain that turned to beauties blind Is but a state of mind But magic happens when we meet And love is the receipt. The web is commiseration Touch and visitation And laurels fall at beck and call That grow you ten foot tall. And every morsel fills your aim Lighting strikes setting flame. Within wild honey of amour In fields of evermore. It is the substance of your goal And the copulate of your soul. ============================ Excellent writing sir. I am truely impressed for sure. I am learning from you and I am loving the temptation of streching out because of some of your works. For that I thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She that caught my essence being Through an inner seeing. ================= But magic happens when we meet And love is the receipt. The web is commiseration Touch and visitation And laurels fall at beck and call That grow you ten foot tall. And every morsel fills your aim Lighting strikes setting flame. Within wild honey of amour In fields of evermore. It is the substance of your goal And the copulate of your soul. ================ laurels?? we dont need no stinkin laurels  they only get in the way of making magic *winkiewinkie* your so cool I gotta wear me mittens to reply to ya later-I'll give a receipt-gator me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, That's the sweetest thing I've read tonight. *L* Mark, Beautiful comment, you do me honor. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy {~,^} Happy New Year 2001 will be good to us and all of the poets here |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It is the substance of your goal And the copulate of your soul." Wonderful Seymour ... beautifully worded, and I just have to say that I love the flow ... cause I do, great rhythm!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Happy New Year, your randy gator. WWS Sunshine, Just stay the way you are. Happy New Year. *L* Kit, May the cupid of the New Year hit you in the *A* with his arrow for a wonderful happy New Year. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 01-01-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This feeling or expression of sympathy you have very cleverly turned into a wonderful love poem....and oh that second verse what a verse of sage wisdom...though heard a thousand times there is always another way to say it and you have penned it wonderfully! "Plain that turned to beauties blind is but a state of mind But magic happens when we meet and love is the reciept." Love it man I love it! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy beautiful Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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