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I am... (post Holiday musings) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I am soft whisper in the trees, The gentle hush of springtime breeze, Touching lightly on the earth, Feel me now, for I am birth. Behold the glory of the dawn, Behold first steps of newborn fawn, Helios shines, begone the night, Feel me now, for I am light. I am the warmth of noonday sun, As flowing streams to rivers run, Two meld as one, as man and wife, Feel me now, for I am life. I am the calm of eventide, A rising wind, 'cross oceans wide, Upon land's brow, a chilling breath, Feel me now, for I am death. I am the land, the sky, the sea, Feel me now, and be set free. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I LOVE the "feeling" in this work, Mike... Nice job for sure...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Behold the glory of the dawn, Behold first steps of newborn fawn, Helios shines, begone the night, Feel me now, for I am light. ================== I am the calm of eventide, A rising wind, 'cross oceans wide, Upon land's brow, a chilling breath, Feel me now, for I am death. I am the land, the sky, the sea, Feel me now, and be set free. ================ you are cadence...rhythm...rhyme you are poetic grace ... keeping perfect time. awesome poem...uplifting and inspiring.. very cool write ... like your style ... always  take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ This is just a beautiful piece of musing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--Post, pre or inbetween...I always enjoy reading your poems...this one is wonderful! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nan... thank you kindly nice teacher lady...*smile* Janet Marie... I appreciate the very gracious comments, glad you enjoyed. Marge...hope your holidays are going well, thank you for reading and replying. Martie...after reading your reply, I don't know whether I'm coming or going..hehe... nice to see your reply my poetic flower child... danke. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done poem, Mike, with such a calm peaceful feel to it! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Mike so nice this was. you always do so well |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Denise...thank you muchly. Glad you enjoyed. Sunshine...thanks for the wonderful... Walt...thank you kindly, appreciate the reply. |
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