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I Almost Wrote A Poem.................
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I Almost Wrote A Poem................. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I almost wrote a poem to tell you of my life what it's like for me to be a mother.........a teacher.........a wife ~**~ I almost wrote a poem to show another side of me a spirit running wild on the beaches of a stormy sea ~**~ I almost wrote a poem to let you take a peek deep inside my romantic heart showing what makes my knees go weak ~**~ I almost wrote a poem of a rainy night spent by the fire creating our own heat~ slowly spending our desire ~**~ I almost wrote a poem of all the wicked things I'd like to do if I could have just one hour ..........all alone with you  ~**~ I almost wrote a poem about this obsession I've got but I'm afraid for these blue pages it would simply be too hot!  ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You twisted it! Well done! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You can send it though EMail ... LOL |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now I know where all those underwater eruptions come from. And to think that I thought they were underwater volcanoes. One hour though??????????????????? Barely enough time to get started...me thinks a day is more like it. Wonderful write and you always show a piece of you and what is in your heart whether you intend to or not my friend.< !signature--> A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ Rex~ the E-mail police would get me! LOL  Mark~ honey after just one hour, you'd be spent .........uh oh.......I showed a piece of myself?!? opps.....what did you see?!!?  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is as always a beautiful piece written with your elegance wit and skill. And as always I love it too. Utterly delightful Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Delightfully teasing.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend.......I was not talking about me. I wouldn't even attempt to keep up with the passion that you hold for your husband. What I saw was a very sweet friend giving me a smile today and those are cherished very deeply. Thank you for that. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ thank you for that sweetie! Marge~ teasing is fun thanks!Mark~ I was only playing with you.......... I hope I didn't offend you........smiles are good and warm the heart, you give me lots of those! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend, you should know by now that you could NEVER offend me. I am flattered more than you could know but I also know reality and that is the wonderful love that I see you glow in everyday in your love of your husband. Truely heaven sent and no-one can mess with that. Now don't go getting shy on me......well not toooooooooo shy anyway. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ so I'll just bat my eyes, grin and blush like mad! -SEA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Loved this one!! We'll wait for Part II Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your almost poem is more than enough .. very cool twist Sea ... good to see your name back here girlie Happy New Year jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read!!!!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You almost wrote a poem?....I'd say you succeeded splendidly!! I enjoyed this very much, SEA!! Denise |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I ALMOST didn't read it. But, I am glad that I did. Melton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my...thought I knew you a bit...but telling about the other side of you, now I am curious..... penned with a teasing touch....love it ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
LOL delightful read |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Circe - Ignore these men - they cannot be trusted! I am so thankful you wrote ME this poem. It was wonderful. What??? It wasn't??? hmmpphhhh.... The poem was OK, I guess. lol |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ thanks, but as for a part two, I have no idea what that would be! Janet~ thank you, being gone for a few days felt like MONTHS!!! Vandana~ I'm glad, thank you Denise~ thank you so much! Melton~ I'm glad you did too! Charisma~ what would you like to know? Beki~ thanks! LngJhnAg~ dear heart.......if I said I wrote it for you would you smile for me!? -SEA (Circe) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"I almost wrote a poem about this obsession I've got but I'm afraid for these blue pages it would simply be too hot!" then simply enjoy it!!!!!! < !signature--> "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...me too |
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