Open Poetry #11 |
The Late of Burgeoning |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Late of Burgeoning while I am always on time in getting to an appointment ~ in life ~ I was always late in maturing physically my body is here in its locality in spirit my body is here in transcendent reality but in burgeoning my body is behind within and in my mind recall I do the want of budding forth but not to have happened with others but later and later came eventually and the intimacy of the briefest garment finally came to me but comfort did not come to me in the strapping on of womanhood it is not as if I could understand even now the want of me so I fearfully feel I have just glided along until… I heard his song deep from within came the fountain of youthful whim and like a fountain of awesome relief I am beginning to feel the breach of burgeoning and of womanhood and more ! and more ~ this causes me some bit of trepidation for the relation is not what was expected age comes in to questioning and mentioning this does not shoal away my thoughts but bought a moment of second guess so comes the quest of my mind slow to unwind in the realm of the day the burgeoning of body complete is not replete in my mind for emotions of force take me on of course and on course I do not mind so sweep me away in these your dreams and carry me off on logical schemes then once more say you've the key to my heart and therefore impart the burgeoning mix twilight with purple and stars with moonlight stir in some magic and mysteries delight then take favored poets of the land that we breathe then come up again and give me relief to hear what they say in the burgeoning I once thought that growth into a size would do fine till I learned that the growth was here right here in my mind and the growth that I've done now suits me just fine so I will live with the burgeoning and I will face the reckoning of that life that will suit me just fine Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ahhh.....Sunshine...... Once a fan, always a fan!! I love this one, and it's whimsical thoughts!! The ending was perfect......."that will suit me just fine"!!! YES!! Merry Christmas, my good friend!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have never seen you Sunshine but I bet you have flowered into enough of a woman to love and satisfy any man. The last part of this where you state that you have blossomed into a better person as a result of your interchange of poetic expression...well! I know that part to be absolutely true!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, Oh wow, this is what I've been saying isn't it I know you have grown, and a wondrous blossoming it is. Oh Kari love this is truly exceptional, it really is magnificent. And every line, every single word is written in letters of fire that show just how much you have grown. I love this one, I think it is stunning Take care love Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lovely free verse, keep writing these, I like them very much! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
panoramic in scope are these lines....one of the beauties of life is that it is never too late to blossom...spread your wings, sunshine... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh, this piece flows with such music and voice! Yes, love shall overcome all obstacles in life, we must move on, burgeoning through every gully and chasm of life. Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Your random thoughts flow with a simple beauty... "and I will continue to read your wonderous gifts soaking them in hoping to learn from your insights some lessons of life maybe changing myself that'll suit me just fine..." Glorious... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and you will continue to grow and flower. . . for your light will always shine. . . beautiful. . . simply beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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