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'Tis Come..............................
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'Tis Come.............................. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 'Tis come 'Tis come, 'tis come! thee harbored night of season right in candlelight 'tis come no more I by dream of high do I lift up to the sky, nay, it's come, it's come the time of me has come silent, soft on wings aloft it's come age, and time begat the mind it's come, it's come some say "she will fly this muse to high" but I say, 'tis come that this the time 'tween age and merry 'tween just and carry of load it's come thus I must not toady about but be about the while of me to stop and see that verily it's come see he that harbors me in his chest? the best of life yet no strife shall bear me away nay I shall stay within his breast for he is best ~ thou art for me… 'tis come he bears this the key of me 'tis come this love Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great format Karilea and wonderful thoughts so well arranged to make such a poetic impression....you're just a little poetic fountain bubbling over with beautiful words. Remember....don't toady about! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
late last night - while everyone else slept - I watched "It's my turn" on late night TV (Jill Clayburgh/Michael Douglas) - This put it in perspective - Thank you - (and the picture - perfect!) (In case you didn't guess- I loved it) |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful...this sounds like something that would be worth however long the wait was. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, it's been a long time coming, methinks!  Again, sunshine, you express yourself beautifully...and Elizabeth is right on. May you receive even a small part of the joy you have given us through your poetry... ok ok I didn't slip any customary wisecracks in...it's Christmas!  Merry Christmas, Karilea...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read!!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, I don't really toady...I'm still a pollywog...LOL...thank you... Mr. Yeats, I don't recall the movie, I guess I shall have to put my pen down and go rent it...thank you!... Elizabeth...yes... 'Deer, I have, thank you!...{~,^} Vandana, thanks!... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh for a night like this!!!!!!!!!!!! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, more like Persephone every day, 'tis wonderful to see and witness. Oh how marvellous this is and yes of course I love it, why would I not. It is written beautifully, presented in elegance and a real delight. Thank you love Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . I see that you've been busy. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tis come indeed........... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Irish!...{~,^} Marsha...thank you little one... Sven, busy writing...that's what you meant... Nan, thankee...{~,^} |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I know (heh heh) it's his pants, my God. he's definitely "merry" and his key is sure to fit!!!!!!!....  < !signature-->"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes Sunshine. . . busy writing. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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