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Open Poetry #11

Two be freed

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-03 08:40 PM

Two be freed

I wish you would let me ease
the darkness of the heart you freeze
but you can not let me in
the thaw of you can not began
your pain echoes inside my head
I know your tears, I have bled
loneliness comes worse at night
yes I know, I fight that fight
with dreamless sleep I know you flow
still so powerless to help you though
looking through a window of space
I back off with style and grace
but if you offer a hand to need
not one heart but two be freed

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

1 posted 2001-01-03 08:52 PM

Very good writing dear friend. I enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2001-01-03 08:55 PM

"I back off with style and grace
but if you offer a hand to need
not one heart but two be freed"

Nice write...I particularly liked the above lines. And Welcome to Passions!

jwesley

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2001-01-04 07:46 PM

This is really good Slick. You seem to have taken to this very well.
Rich

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2001-01-04 08:28 PM

Slick,
Well done, well articulated.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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