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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Ramblings By Richard Maxfield 12-24-2000 Teardrops frozen in time on my cheek Crying for the lost soul of the past Loss of the further Dreams and plans fade As the clock ticks slowly Time standing still as it rushes by Hollow words once carried meaning Unspoken words scream for an ear Yet the backs of the once loved have no ears Deaf ears hearing but not understanding Words of the heart echoing into the abyss Truth escapes while lies live Blind eyes seeing only what they want Eyes searching for the hidden truth Clouded by the haze of untruth Seeing into the heart of stone Some eyes see into the darkness Yes my eyes see but look away Unconnected hearts no longer beat Not hearts of flesh but of stone You think you know love you heart Hard cold stone heart how do you live How do you find love or does it matter So selfish you heart of stone The clock slowly ticks Time standing still as it rushes by |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Ramblings" of many truths. Time passes by so fast and yet when were hurting it seems to stand still. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Richard...oh wow...this sure cuts deep...and you write the pain so beautifully I love these lines Deaf ears hearing but not understanding Words of the heart echoing into the abyss Truth escapes while lies live Love the whole poem but these just grabbed me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Just cannot respond better than inot2B. I agree completely! When I was watching my mother die and waiting, hoping, my daughter would arrive before my mother, her grandma, had breathed her last, time raced and stood still all at once. Those moments, minutes, hours were so greatly filled with agony. Time is more relative than Einstein showed through science. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
You tell that lying, cheating hoe bag! Bravo! Dont take crap from any heartbreaking *****es! |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thanks for the comments. I'm not sure where this came from but it just flowed out as a rambling so that is what I named it. Thanks again for the comments. Love and light, Richard |
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