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Twas The Night Before Christmas, At Balladeer's House
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Twas The Night Before Christmas, At Balladeer's House |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Twas The Night Before Christmas, At Balladeer's House, Not a creature was stirring, (You can bet not a mouse) Poor Balladeer, Was all snug in his bed, While visions of cockroaches, Danced in his head. Milk and cheap cookies, Were left by the hearth, A plastic bag and Pepto, In case Santa should barf. All of a sudden, he heard such a clatter, He jumped outta bed, To see what's the matter! Up on the rooftop, Santa was twitching, The reindeer were scatching, Shaking and itching. With Balladeer's knowledge, And without hesitation, He knew of the answer: A flea-infestation! He ran next store To his sailor friend LongJohn, Got his X-girlfriend's bathsoap, "Walmart Diazinon" He opened the top, Put it on Blitzen, On Prancer-on Dancer, And finally on Vixen (You've heard of Vixen, that reindeer that's blonde, She once had this "thing" For that pervert LongJohn) The reindeer felt better It was after eleven, Santa kept itching, Deer dusted with "Sevin" Then Santa went off He yelled over his back: "Merry Christmas to all" By "MistleToe-rag" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You'd think a bug man would have his house protected from fleas and such, wouldn'tja? *G* This is great, sweets... and I love the Vixen comments! *G* SMOOCH, MistleToerag! *G* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You scamp...now I've got the giggles... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ToeMan~ What a true ragging you've given our Balladeer. Funny fellow - Hope your holidays are bright and cheerful For we know you'll drop by with an earful ... of harassment for the fearful - Both LongJohn and Balladeer will cower in their stockings While you just keep the Passion's board rocking !  *Hi, sweet man ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
HEHE...My first "big" laugh of the day...Well, almost...But it certainly was the second...This was too cute... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Thank you all, and Ho Ho Ho.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Toerag, this is a real hoot!!! I can hardly wait to see Balladeer's comments. I hope I remember to keep looking this one up so I can see what he says. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
ROTFLMAO!!! You got me on this one, ya bum! Being the nice person I am, of course there will be absolutely NO retaliation due to my large Christmas spirit......NOT!!!!! See ya around missile-Toe  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OOOOOH -I LOVE Mistle-Toerag too...  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
thanks for all the kind replies gang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
..a treat to read  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
every bug from miles around gathers inside don't they, because they all need a Christmas ballad to make them sing "ho ho ho" and he takes care them doesn't he! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it, and it make me smile..... Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mistle Toe eh? So if I get under you, will you kiss me? LOL this is fun - SEA |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Toerag, LOLOL.. Very very cute! Thank you for the much needed laugh today |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Toe, Too funny!!! Never knew Santa had fleas!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is hysterical, Toe! Very funny! Nice to see you again! Denise |
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Rowen Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 12 |
Very funny! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Toe strikes again!!! Cute sir, very cute. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh my. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You got me in a fit of giggles... This is too sweet... coco |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
S E A !!! under Toerag? Kissing him? I am crushed!!! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I'm going to have to report this to the swatter... they said there wasn't any bugs around here... LOL dale . |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Toe - Great poem - and I know it's the truth (except for that bareface lie about that cute, sweet, hot lil Vixen - oops). It's great seeing you try to write poems that rhyme. We all have to start somewhere - lol. Stand by for a response! For even a slight slight cannot go unpunished! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Twas the night before Christmas And you folks all know This suthern belle's thinking About that sweet Toe And of how richly My life has been blessed By having his friendship. He's simply the best! The spirit of giving We feel in this season Is his every day. He asks for no reason To make the world brighter As he passes through - When compassion's your master, Being kind's what you do. We've all benefited From the smiles he shares His humor and great wit Just show that he cares. But behind the laughter Is a man who's known grief, A heart craving peace, A soul needing relief. So Santa, I have Just one thing on my list: Could you please give my dear friend Complete happiness? Surround him with love Let the laughs reach his soul Give decades of good health To relish his role Of doting father To his daughter and son, Give success and fulfillment And plenty of fun! Return some of the joy That he gives to me And I'll be satisfied - This I guarantee! Sorry, sweets... I stopped in to visit your poem before leaving for the farm... knowing I probably wouldn't find an invitation for rescue from that fate but would take some smiles with me. *S* And then I went and got all serious. *S* (Just let me know the when and where for my punishment... I know I deserve it! *EG*) Wherever you are, you're held in this heart... I wish you the very best, dear one... (and one silly ***** suthern belle for balance! LOL) Merry Christmas, sweet man... SMOOCH! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... this was wonderful Toerag, I'm sorry I missed it the first time through, but great grins for Christmas Eve morning. Thanks for the smiles. (and Suthern ... that was a beautiful and heartfelt tribute ... just lovely) Happy Holidays and Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very cute..including the responses...but I must have missed something and don't quite understand this "pesting" occupation of yours...and how it started, maybe one day you shall explain to anyone who doesn't understand it's beginnings? thank you for a fun read and have a wonderful holiday ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
CUTE  |
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