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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-23 06:06 PM




My golden tresses of silk upon
satin pillows do lay
Dreams adrift with longings
so caught in sweet sleep
Captivating Knight lyrics not forgotten by day
Lovesongs tempting my desires so deep.

Gentle breezes blow through my window so fair

Oh...
is it thee my good Knight in my arms that I hold?

Kissing my lips…
Strong fingers now run through my hair
Fires warming my heart
where I’d once been so cold.

Passions, long kept captive in my secret place
Dancing flames…. fires burn…
and passion ignites

Oh
How I long to gaze full upon your handsome face
Come hither now love...
Closer this enchanting night

My heart
Take flight with gossamer wings
of my loves delight
I call out your name, love....
and bid you to come
Enraptured of love and your whelm
O Good Knight
We two ,intertwined
passionately become now as one.

Amidst moonlit persuasions
and whispers of bliss
Fulfilling of dreams and promises, now kept
The look of your dark eyes into mine...
as our lips locked to kiss
Or was it just a dance
in the roses with you as I slept?


© 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa
(All rights reserved)




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2000-12-23 06:23 PM


Well now, koko, you can write to my heart anytime you please...lovely, my friend.

jwesley

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
2 posted 2000-12-23 07:03 PM


Thanks so much and Merry Christmas!< !signature-->

Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko
  



[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 12-23-2000).]

maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
3 posted 2000-12-23 07:31 PM


What a wonderful poem. It was so full of love and passion. Gee I need to go find me a Lady to kiss or take a cold shower. LOl
Love and light,
Richard

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
4 posted 2000-12-23 10:05 PM


Well Richard, I do believe that if you are the same Richard Maxfield over at Starlite Cafe, that I have a few of your poems as well that are "shower" material. As a matter of fact I have studied your poems for quite awhile over the last year and learned a bit from you. hehehehe thanks! And...I visted your website and bookmarked it as well.(Now if you are not him, you are his twin)LOL
see ya and take care!


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2000-12-24 02:21 AM


I did like this one, loved the last two lines.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


windwarrior
New Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 7
California
6 posted 2000-12-24 02:59 AM


Koko, You just know how to articulate your words in such a romantic way. Honey you move me!
xoxoxRJ>>>

live like there's no tomorrow,
RJ

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2000-12-24 04:12 AM


Well now! what a little beauty this poem is.. it just keeps getting warmer as one reads it! I think it's a real gem!...have a nice holiday and take care...ethome
KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
8 posted 2000-12-24 06:19 AM


Merry Christmas ethome! thanks
and RJ have yourself a Merry lil' Christmas.
Glad it warmed you up... see you!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
9 posted 2000-12-24 08:28 AM


KoKo...beautiful!

Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
10 posted 2000-12-24 10:29 AM


Lovely warm thoughts to light a fire by on this Christmas Eve morning ... such a melodic flow Koko, this was just beautiful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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