Open Poetry #11 |
Role Reversal |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A tender touch, you awake in me Your passion communicating, The vision of your eyes Touching me The auditory substance of your throat Speaking my name The sensation of your breath Flowing over my skin All these and more The warmth of your body Next to mine Your lips kissing Holding me in your arms All so sensual Drinking Dining Body wine-ing We two, moving Moving, In rhythm Dance of Love Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and the music plays on... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, I would reverse roles with you anyday, you seem to have such a loverly time and then you write so well about it. write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautiful, a dance of love. What more could a woman ask for? I feel the New Year is going to be very good to you. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Body wine-ing" Now I like that thought. Good piece WY. jwesley |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea- I'm listening - I love to dance Thank you Kethry- who could refuse such an offer? Thanks inot2B- 2001? - we'll see - I hope so - thank you JW- I went thru a few translations before coming to that - Thanks [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Very lovely thoughts from you Bill...such a lucky lady she is |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Speaking my name The sensation of your breath Flowing over my skin All these and more The warmth of your body Next to mine Your lips kissing Holding me in your arms All so sensual Drinking Dining Body wine-ing We two, moving Moving, In rhythm ================= im so digging your rhythm ... poetically speaking of course *smile* love when ya write like this my sensual poet-gator ... like the premise of this... perfect title later-now your cooking with gas-gator lol jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - Janet Marie - My love keeps me inspired - and if that weren't enough - your words are Gas poured on the fire |
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