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There With You...... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Please know that I am there with you In everything you do All burdens I will bear with you Until each day is through. I'm in the faces that you see I'm in the morning sun Of all the blooms upon your sill I'm there in every one. Please know how much I think of you As your day goes along I teeter on the brink of you Please let this make you strong. You're in the rain that gently falls You're in the morning dew. When strangers smile and say hello I know that they are you. You are the breakfast that I eat You're in my morning mail Should some small act make my lips smile You did it, without fail. Your road goes right and mine goes left No reason to pretend But who's to say they will not meet Somewhere around the bend? Until that time I'm there for you As you are here for me Please take how much I care for you And use it lovingly. Dear, take these thoughts I share with you In deep sincerity For I am always there with you And you are here with me. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer, well are you named, your music lives and breathes. I was gonna say something about you being a ham and that making you a part of your breakfast, but this piece is just too beautiful. Be wel, do tell Kethry< !signature--> Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful.....simply wonderful...have not the right words to describe how I love this one...but I know that this is a keeper. thanks for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Your road goes right and mine goes left No reason to pretend But who's to say they will not meet Somewhere around the bend?" "Until that time I'm there for you As you are here for me Please take how much I care for you And use it lovingly." Now Michael ... just how often can we take all these words that make our hearts simply swoon? Forever, LOL! Wonderful Michael, your heart is in a beautiful place right now, and it just shows through these incredible poems. Beautiful!  Happy Holidays and Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer...new lights gleam and are gleaned through your words of care and concern for your friend[s]...I know there cannot be just one, for you are, Sir, a giver to all...and this of course will strike all hearts of the men and women who read this... the cadence rings and sings...this is lovely...and I have to agree, it is a keeper... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Excellent - top drawer - one of your very best - (I'm creating an acronym :IWIHWTM for "I wish I had written this myself") so when you see it (as now) you'll know I'm giving you the highest compliment I can bestow. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
this is extremely wonderful. It flows so smoothly and the rhyme scheme is perfect. The sentiments are outstanding. Thanks for sharing such a lovely work! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kethry...you may refer to me as a ham any time....just don't expect me to bring home the bacon  Charisma....thank you for keeping me  Kit..thank you! Yes, my heart is well located..not necessarily the rest of me!! Thank you, my friend...sunshine...yes, a giver to all I try to be and all may use my thoughts in their best interests..I am just a poet, I suppose... Bill...THFYKT....thank you for your kind thoughts koko...thank you!! I appreciate comments on the structure and flow very much! [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think the knowledge of your being 'there' has long since been known, but it's always nice to refresh the idea, isn't it? Well done Mr. B. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer, ahh now this fills me with a warm and wondrous glow. I really like this, it's one of those really special ones. A keeper definitely, and a very pleasing thought to finish my day off. (Not that I have finished my day yet, but only another couple of hours or so, and I can drag myself off home.) Delightful and terrific writing. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Has anyone told you what a fine poet you are? This is lovely, the words are beautiful...these words are alive and give hope to anyone who feels lost in a crowd and alone. Merry Christmas Michael!!!!!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh come on, life is too short. Make those roads meet, and do it soon!!!!!!! Remember Toerag and LngJhnAg are coming around the corner trying to change her mind. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How do you do this????? One beautiful poem after another...and all the ladies sigh!!! This is quite elegant, and a wonderful Christmas gift for someone....lucky lady! Hugs for Christmas, 'deer!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beautiful writing, Michael!!!! yes, i know you are and so am i and i thought of this tonight when i was bringing the groceries in, wishing i could be cooking you christmas eve dinner ....*sigh*.... LOL... do you believe that?... hmmmmm.... well.... why not? life is short as ms inot2b says er, i mean, wishing i could be cooking christmas dinner for all the special poetpeople including you... ROFL  but geez... this is just the internet and boy do we all love poetry, y'know? especially yours!!!! this is an EXCELLENT poem, sweet Michael.... and i thank you for posting it because knowing that someone is there for you is very special, indeed.... Merry Christmas!!!my 'Deer man... i hope you find everything you wanted underneath the tree!!! (((hug))) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You really are exceptional with words Bal HUSG Merry Christmas |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Needs a repost... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
time for a trip to the top! love this one. martyjo |
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