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Please Me (in response to Doreen's 'Please Write me' challenge)
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Please Me (in response to Doreen's 'Please Write me' challenge) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Please Me (Despite similarities, posted with Ms Peri's approval) Please me Please, write your words for me Words that stoke my fires In depths where my heart can see Find my soul where hearts inspire Where I burn Bring me to your innermost being Where your fire's flint resides Together we'll strike love's tinder Fan the flames what e're betide Borne of rapport so slender An eternal flame deep inside Long before I saw your door Your implores Came through my floor Well beyond 'adore' 'Adore' and more We'll join and my love On you I'll pour Passion's great But so's the fanning A simple look My thought's worth banning Humid heat Moisture flowing But I want more A true love growing Wear me Like a lycra garment So close we'll be Know what my heart meant Elastic matching pore to pore Within your spark A mitten's spore Leavening light in dark This steed needs run The trail of scent sends me full gallop You have the reins When perspiration rains Pheromones bleeding pursuing your goal True to your essential soul Please me Please, write your words for me Please me Please me writing deep inside In the arms of Morpheus Where dreams reside Raging dreams Where nothing lacks Just one beast One with two backs Please me Please, write your words for me Burn us to crisp, describe our fire The hottest flame: my sole desire Weave for me in words so searing Direct your words at this desire White-hot flames, Extreme, burn higher As dust settles Mire is gone Dried to a crisp Write words inspired "Burn baby burn" Scribe in this dust Desert heat Most passioned lust As Ms Peri said so aptly: "These phrases are Not of a whim! You are my pen" (for me) So please me Write of passion's play For engraved in me You did portray Your heart's image There to stay When we do the best that we can, we never know what miracle is wrought in our life, or in the life of another. ~ Helen Keller ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geesh, you mean all of the writing prior to this moment that I've perspired over didn't please you? I've got to do better, and more? What a task master you are! Where's that fountain pen when I need it...!!! {~,^} Certainly enjoyed this one Mr. Yeats...I smiled ALL the way through... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Very nice, Wilfred.... I liked it very much!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OMIGOD!!!this is very HOT!  geez, you mean all i have to do is some shameless begging for attention and i get written and everything with some fine verse? this is awesome.... i'm.... *blushing*...  excellent writing, Bill! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sunshine - You're already 2 of 3 toward a hat trick with your postings - i've great faith in you ~G~ Irish - Many thanks milady - tis a great subject - thus easier to write to Doreen - now it's my turn to blush - you're too kind Doreen - you'd set the pattern - ~G~ made it much too easy [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 12-23-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I don't know what to say. Begging for someone to write to you in that passionate certain way. Kind Sir try to control yourself, you must remember your blood pressure. Some of these women will say almost anything just to get your attention. I do like the way you flow your thoughts. It sounds like spring is just around the corner. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
inot2B - I have to tell you - shamelessly - my blood pressure is constant and normal - all my life- and i take no shame in begging or kicking myself BTTT Thanks for reading |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Bill, this is very full...like it was born from deep inside before exploding onto the page...very well done! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie - Wow - even your responses are couched in poetic phrases -I had great subject matter - Thank you  |
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