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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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I Will Let You I will let you into my heart where I will hold you close with warmth I will let you open the doors kept firmly closed and locked I will share the love I have for HIM who dwells on high I will give the gift of who I am deep within my soul I will share with you light and love and laughter I will walk the forest and listen to the brook I will share the world and hear The Word I will gaze into the night skie at great HIS love I will sigh at the beauties as I see the wonders given I will give thanks for all that HE has bless me with in life I will pray that you receive the blessings HE would give to you come share my heart giving all my love with open arms hold you will I Karen Torbiak© 2000 Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
WOW TOOOOOO COOOOOOOL BRAVO!!!!!! Loved it. Love and light, Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was beautiful my friend, to see, of course, and to read, but particularly the heart I saw between the lines. jwesley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen, Stellar astral light for He that keeps you day and night. Well done Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Very creative Karen and the words pure beauty. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
absolutely fantastic, Karen!!! WOW! How I admire someone who puts so much effort and beauty into her creations....this is special!!!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful poem Karen and of course I love the poem format into a picture as well. You weren't around when I once challenged the poets to do the same but let me tell you...you would have earned a gold medal. The poem and the sentiment were not lost though as the message of love and the reason for the holiday itself were very evident and for that I applaud you. Your time and effort to show all the aspects of the poem and then wrap it in your design are very well received. Happy Holidays to you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Richard Thank you, sweet man, I am so very glad you like this one. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me. jwestly *sigh* I am so glad you could see between the words and lines. Thank you for being you. Much love and Big Christmas hugs to you from me. kethry Thank you, dear one. You have a glorious heart. Much love and Christmas hugs from me to you. John Thanks so much, sweet friend. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me. Mr. Balladeer I am so glad I can impress one of your talents. Seems your special kind of spirit is given to all and it is indeed beautiful to behold. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me. Mark *sigh* I am very pleased that you liked my efforts at shapes. I have done a couple and find them interesting to do. I put my heart into everything I write so I am very glad that you were able to see that. *sigh* you always leave me feeling so soft after your comments. Thank you, sweet man. Much love and Christmas hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ How fitting the format to both your posting ID and the season. Your thoughts rest easy on the heart. Bless you through this Holy-Day of seasons. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done Karen! I love the format and the thoughts within.....wonderful experiment in style....a real sign of a creative person........... ethome |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marge Thank you so very much. This was a work of soft love which surprised me with the way it came out. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me. Eric Sweet friend, your comments are always held so dear to me. It is thanks to you that I have tried so many styles*giggling* though I can't seem to get away from my topic being love. I remember well you letters telling me how to explore writing and I think of you each time I try something new. I adore you, dearest man. Much love and Christmas hugs from my heart to your heart. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
startime...so glad i came in too see this beautiful picture painted |
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