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From Lips of The Whisperer [repost from 08/2000]
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From Lips of The Whisperer [repost from 08/2000] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 From Lips of The Whisperer to mine ears come his words so sure from his lips, he, the Whisperer, tender pensiveness of melody meant to be heard by only me O listen listen, my heart sings sonnets upon sonnets do ring free'd verse rhythmically sweeps me to passionate depths, I weep soft warm breath to lobe of mine intoxicatingly spoken, sublime when there is this, no need for wine enchanting me, does he, for all time… to mine ears come his words ever sure from his lips, he, the Whisperer… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 13 August 2000 |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
Wonderful write! You have certainly captured the effect some people (or special people) have upon us through their words. Cheering!!  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hey Sunshine...I'm a whisperer and I say this is a fantastic piece! Take care! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sunshine, the way your poem just flowed and how the expression in presentation kinda scroll danced atop the page had me amazed... I had to take another peak before I closeup on this reply just to make sure my eyes were not deceiving me if you know what I mean... I tell ya sweetie this is a splendid read... coco |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kindasorta, thank you for sharing your thoughts... Hey Nate...so am I...thanks for listening so closely... Coco, the presentation does sort of have a pathway feel to it, doesn't it...thank you!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You know it's a Jungel out there but it's not so bad somehow when you're in it...you know what I mean...and this is a very soft and romantic write from you...I enjoyed it very much.....take care and have a nice holiday... ethome |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, can I even count the number of times...I've heard that line...! I even say it myself! LOL...you enjoy your holidays, thanks for spending some time in Passions... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is so beautiful, Karilea! Your words are like feathers falling from the air...softly floating down to land on one's heart. I LOVE this poem...that's why I'm shouting! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My goodness Deer...I could hear you in the shower! LOL...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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