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My Sweet
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My Sweet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My Sweet Yes my sweet of course I enjoy your smile. And your tender heart leaves me beguiled. Now can you guess my favorite part I would miss the most if we fell apart. I'll give you a clue it's right in front of you. Without whose presence you could not speak. Yes, they are your lips my sweet. For without those sweet and luscious lips I would have no one to share my kiss. Jameslee@December22,2000 Christmaskisses |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James if this is any indicator you will need to purchase mistletoe by the ton.  Be well Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the sweetness of a kiss. *sigh* oh yes this Star loved the words of this poem. Lips sharing the deepness of sweet love. *sigh* much love and Christmas hugs from me to you, dear one. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wonderful writing. i enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely said my friend...romantic even. I'm sure she loved this one!!! jwesley |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
very sweet and romantic!! enjoyed this much! hey yeah, get that mistletoe and put it on your hat! Mele Kalikimaka!Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
your such a romantic, beautifully written |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful love poem James...very nice indeed! have a nice holiday.....ethome |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kethry, Startime, Richard, jwesley, Koko, Rosebud and ethome for the nice responses...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ as always, wonderfully sweet! -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea...James |
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