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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-01-09 01:44 PM



Sea of Serenity

We hear at the shore
Serene music in her roar
enchantful, soft, strong

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


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1 posted 2001-01-09 02:19 PM


very lovely..beautifully written

               ~V~


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2 posted 2001-01-09 03:52 PM


Another beautiful Senryu.......lovely!   -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-09 07:01 PM


PoeMinister~
Me like !
~*Marge*~


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Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-01-09 11:45 PM


Victoria, Sea, and Marge--Thank you.  Glad you liked.

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5 posted 2001-01-10 09:33 AM


fair warning...anytime I see serenity in a poem I consider it mine! LOL...this is a lovely haiku.
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6 posted 2001-01-10 09:41 AM


a beauty! could you define te senryu for me for clearer understanding?

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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7 posted 2001-01-23 08:55 PM


poeminister,

your offerings at haiku/senryu mean a lot to me...continue to enlighten me with those, okay

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8 posted 2001-01-24 01:39 AM



Wow!  Yes, yes!  Well penned!

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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