Open Poetry #11 |
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Sea of Serenity (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sea of Serenity We hear at the shore Serene music in her roar enchantful, soft, strong Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely..beautifully written ![]() ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Another beautiful Senryu.......lovely! ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Me like ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Victoria, Sea, and Marge--Thank you. Glad you liked. Poeminister |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
fair warning...anytime I see serenity in a poem I consider it mine! LOL...this is a lovely haiku. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
a beauty! could you define te senryu for me for clearer understanding? Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
poeminister, your offerings at haiku/senryu mean a lot to me...continue to enlighten me with those, okay ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Yes, yes! Well penned! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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