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The Awe And Aura Of Love
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The Awe And Aura Of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite The Awe And Aura Of Love Love, a pollen spore, blown and sown, Transcending into overtone, That brakes the bounds of earthly bed And flowers in your heart and head. You are enceinte with its girth Surrounded by a field of birth. Full bloom and radiant fair. Enthralled with its being there. It arrests you in every way, Like being King of a soiree. On the constant edge of exalt, It leads you into full default. A bouquet of exquisite hold. A habitual rainbows fold. A chameleon of colored hues. A garden of greens and blues. Its bloom peaks beauty every day, Dancing an exotic display. Quixotic as an angels spell, Euphoric, as a flowers smell. It is a metamorphosis. A type of lovers genesis. You've passaged into Edens goal The very essence of her soul. Without the pain of giving birth. You've reached your heaven here on earth |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful words! Corinne |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely written my friend...and thank goodness I could attain that "heaven on earth" without giving birth. Children are wonderful but I'll happily leave birthing to women, though I do like being there for the occasion. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy.... you made me smile.... and think.... and know.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A bouquet of exquisite hold. A habitual rainbows fold. A chameleon of colored hues. A garden of greens and blues. Its bloom peaks beauty every day, Dancing an exotic display. Quixotic as an angels spell, Euphoric, as a flowers smell. It is a metamorphosis. A type of lovers genesis. You've passaged into Edens goal The very essence of her soul. Without the pain of giving birth. You've reached your heaven here on earth ================== me thinks if ya cut yourself.. you would bleed poetry...in rhyme ...with perfect cadence...and with the Aura of a rose garden ... and OF COUSRE a drop or two of WAY COOL ...  and in case ya cant tell.. this poem makes me giddy... Loooooove this one ... later-me winkiewinkie-gator me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour this is so very well written and it took a lot of poetic guts to put in metamorphosis and then try to rhyme to it.. but then I enjoyed the whole idea of the poem 'The Awe And Aura Of Love' "It's bloom peaks beauty everyday, Dancing an exotic display. Quixotic as an angel's spell Euphoric, as a flower's smell." Very very nice work indeed......ethome |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thank you sweet. Jwesley, Nice comment, thank you. Sunshine, Glad I can do these things. *L* JM, One rose on ice, winkiewinkie Stinky Ethome, Thank you for the very very. |
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