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'Tis One Love.........................
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'Tis One Love......................... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 'Tis One Love to come from darkness into the light as shadows lift from the night as peace settles in and all is right and love has crested in eye's sight in purple shadows of passions light as the valley below the mount gives me shelter I shall count on the one true love that I know of in the lee of his heart the words he imparts this one love in golden glow of passions might so beneath the light in water's fall 'neath rainbow high God, my sigh shall reach his ear he shall hear the want of me 'tis heavenly this one love Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful picture and beautiful words....thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
*sighing over here* I love your blend...I am not good at a smooth rhyme...and I love the way this flow so perfectly... I'm envious...of your word...and of the feeling behind them...  Beautifully done... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SUNSHINE, my goodness the imagery and expression in your poem is breathtaking... Upon finishing the read I scrolled back up to top of page and in awe I gaze upon the image you placed... Hmmm... you're just way2cool of a poet dear lady coco |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nathan, so glad to see you...thank you for reading... Breathe, don't be envious, just enjoy the share...thank you for the read... Coco...thank you for the lovely compliment... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'Tis lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Marge... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
An exquisite poem, so wonderfully flowing and lovely images to stir one's soul. The graphic was wonderful in choice to inhance a great work of art! Excellent read! smiles, Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, Persephone love, this is totally stunning, it truly is. You just get better, I said before that you had transcended to a higher plane, well you've just leaped again. Truly amazingly gorgeous work love. Wonderful and yes I adore it too, Take care Majestic Marsha  Bee good ...... I know you always are Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful in all respects my friend - especially loved the last four lines... "he shall hear the want of me 'tis heavenly this one I love." jwesley |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and the beauty continues to flow from your pen, sunshine. What a mood you set!! I agree with J Wesley..."hear the want of me"..what a powerful phrase that is. This is beautiful... I thought I heard "the want of me" from my ex-wife - but it was only gas!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the reverential respect of this piece Sunshine .....ya keep crankin'em out there my dear ray of sunshine and they are just so wonderful to read......have a nice holiday....ethome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Koko, sometimes one just has to see an image, and the words flow...so I thank you for your insight... Marsha, the higher plane has always been there, and I am just now beginning to touch it...you my friend, are a STAR... James,...thank you...having one's words repeated, indeed, to hear them back, is the greatest compliment... 'Deer...sorry about the smell... Ethome...I shall ray upon you always, as long as passions lives....and you have a wonderful holiday too... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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