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Pacific Angel |
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windwarrior New Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 7California |
Deep in dreams of my mind Lives a divine angel! Shaped to my every glittering fantasy Molded to my every wish And she comes in shimmering splendor Silencing every distinct soul in awe Even angels of lore can't dare compare, To a beauty so captivating! Valor of the darkest night, Show no match for her golden hair! No diamond money could ever buy, Can match those emerald eyes! Oh! and listen close enough... Hear those melodious whispers ? Those ever so gentle yearns ? They wile my every wish Intoxicate my very essence How sweet! But they never reach my ears They linger but only in my mind! My hand springs forth to touch her, Oh! but she lies just beyond my grasp! Oh! my soul screams just to go free, To kiss those satin lips and give her life To make love to her, endlessly adrift On oceanic waves of pleasure And my eyes... They burn with the urge to be opened, To wake up and see, my angel My Pacific sea nymph beside me! Deep in my heart, I know this angel solely exists in my dreams. To open my eyes, I would loose her, Sweet dreams, shattered but to a thousand pieces. And so I clench my eyes forever shut, Hoping the time will never come, When this sweet dream has to end. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome, your poem is beautiful, so full of what dreams are. You have entered the right place, we have a few angels here that may get you to open your eyes to behold. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Windwarrior, welcome to passions. I hope you stay awhile, then I could read more of your work. write on, belong Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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windwarrior New Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 7California |
Thank you kindly. I do have a special friend who invited me to post my poems here. I think she is right about it being a friendly forum to post poetry. I look forward to seeing some others work here. Happy Holidays. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading about this Pacific Angel..James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Windwarrior, welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first poem to post! We look forward to many more from you. Please check your e-mail for a special message. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
RJ, This is a very emotional read....I am glad you decided to come post here... I am smiling ear to ear! Please do post more soon  aloha nui loa, KokoPassion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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windwarrior New Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 7California |
Koko,You never cease to amaze me! Thank you for all that you do and all that you are. I know I will enjoy this forum much. It's cold here today..and you write a nice hot tease poem! Well., I'll have to get even! xoxoxRJ>> live like there's no tomorrow, RJ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* beautiful, dreamy and filled with the fantasy I so love. Wonderful writing. Welcome to passions. I will enjoy reading more of your work. Much love and christmas hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done and Welcome to Passions, my friend, there are indeed, "many angels here". jwesley |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Welcome friend, This is a great poem I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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