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A Christmas Note
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A Christmas Note |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 A Christmas Note in pavonine shawl to keep her warm in morn's light scrawls her thoughts to write iridescent gleam of fringe she fingers to smooth ink flows from her well tactile impressions lend silk to her ruffled thoughts and she pens her words "For you, love, for you, my Christmas gift to you now is the all of me" fountain pen laid down pavonine shawl slips to ground Christmas morn comes soft |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - this sure brought a warm and Christmassy smile to me this morning. Thank you so much for such a beautiful work, Sunshine. Michael |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine,what a colourful and lovely write. Great minds think alike.  (enigmatic smile)Write on Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My gosh, sunshine, I can picture her sitting there with the fire's glow on her face, penning this in the still of early morning, shawl around her shoulders. You made this so simple...and so real. It is beautiful... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, sensual, tender! Is this an actual gift to someone special? If so, ... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i wrote that note without the shawl - then placed myself beneath the tree - and pretty soon, he found his gift and smiling big, he unwrapped me!!! hehe...  great write, karilea.... merry christmas |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Sunshine~  Merry Christmas to you!! ~SEA |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
She gave her all, what better gift could she give. You wrote this oh so charming. May I say what a beautiful shawl. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Oh Karilea - What a beautifl gift you've given us -(And if you don't mind - I'll take this personally - and simply say: "Thanks - I needed this today". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a gift once given. . . I love the colors. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is utterly beautiful, such a wonder love, such a delight, do I love this. Yes I do Truly exquisite take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michael it is not often you grace my poems, but today I am grateful you did...thank you my friend... Keth...I am honored to be of a great mind such as yours...thank you... 'Deer...it is simple...when real is real...and I thank you for peeking in... Virginia...would I tell?...and I thank you for reading... doreen...no simple moment of seriousness hey?...I so enjoy your moments of special...Merry Christmas right back at you, and I am sure I shall say this many times yet... SEA...Merry Christmas to you my friend... into2B...if there is one better gift, I know what it is.... Mr. Yeats...personally and with my best wishes...I hope you always receive what you need... Sven...peacock feathers are lovely in winter.... Marsha, probably the best lines you've EVER written to me...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very nice warm and beautiful thoughts Karilea! Very nice indeed!! take care ethome |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome my friend, Merry Christmas...you've gifted me with three "verys"...and thank you for the "take care", I do...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Shunshiny girl this is breathtakingly beautiful...devine read my friend, thanks for sharing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You once again have penned the golden weave of the season's magic. Wonderful write my friend and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!! Be safe and take the time to hear the reindeer whisper. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tracie my dear, thank you for reading... and Mark? All the animals speak at midnight on the Holy Night...would that all of us will hear... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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