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Christmas Gift |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Christmas is coming Let’s go to parties Let’s march right up Laughing real hearty We'll sing us a song As if we belong When Christmas time is near Cookies and candy Come in real handy Our noses are runny We have no real money But we can sing Those jingle bells Let’s find us some houses Rich men and their spouses They’ll sweep us both up And all will be well Christmas is coming When dreams will come true With a wish to be loved, my brother, I do Brother I tell you one day will be so Our angel will come and up we will go I don’t think at Christmas Though cold as we are To find us some warmth We’ll have to go far Christmas is sharing Christmas is caring Let’s go find love to keep Our rags that we wear A babe once did bare In a manger was born In heavenly sleep So for those that may laugh Or turn us away We live life like Jesus That’s what we'll say Jesus then born without anything We too are fit to be kings We just want to be held and kissed Want to be loved, want to be missed If we’ve no homes at least we’ll provide Dwellings for Jesus, He who has died We will survive I know that it’s cold For so long a new life has been foretold Singing carols around barrels Lit by warm flames Wishing two strangers Would call us by name Driving a car they’d dash us away Then Christmas would be a wondrous day Let’s not lose sight, our focus is clear Through Christ we will find, Christmas has cheer Hey brother wake up Let’s go for a Christmas affair Where children are welcome I’ll race you right there Thank you for giving if you were able this year We know there was love in your gifts and your souls And for all of our hopes we will wish you good cheer Through your kindness and Jesus we will be whole Merry Christmas [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you walt!!! This is just what I wanted!! What a beautiful spirit you are! Hugs and Merry Christmas to you, my dear friend!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Now, this is what I call Christma Spirit Walty  An excellent Christmas poem you have penned my dear, Merry Christmas to you and your family!! Maree < !signature--> "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you both so much |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 I realy liked your perspective with this poem.... I felt that I was the brother awake... I could feel the chill and the warmth standing around that bonfire... It is amazing how much faith that man has in Christ to realize that he is not alone but he has a friend who went through the very things he now faces. A Wnderful Christmas poem and to you, Bob <>< |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks LightHouse. when i was writing this I had it as two street children. a brother and a sister with the sister as the speaker. thanks for the comments. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ This says it all - 'Christmas is sharing Christmas is caring' Merry Christmas, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
MERRY WAYOUT CHRISTMAS WALT |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
margey and nanny, HAPPY YULE! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A wonderful Christmas poem Walt, you've done well with this. Thank you and Merry Christmas!! On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
You've painted a nice picture here! I like the, "We just want to be held and kissed Want to be loved, want to be missed...." hohoho |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WALT, I enjoyed this read... I wish you and your family a BEARRY MERRY Christmas and a JOLLY HAPPY New Year... hugsFromMe2U |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Gentle Coco Cruising thank you you three wise kings yuh! |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Warm feelings from the Burns house |
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