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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-12-22 12:00 PM


  A sentimental moment

In a moments revelry
I posted a card in whim.
A cartoon a fantasy
To my charming daughter Kim.

It was a funny little graph
And was sent as just a gift
In hopes it would bring a laugh
To her mood, some spirits lift.

A whimsical little wile
To change blue, to sunny fare
And a frown to a brief smile
A pun, one that we could share.

It was a little caper
An affectionate display
And it will stay the paper
To look on some other day.

A cartooned Don Quixote
Charging down a black windmill
Screaming, "your a blight in the way."
My dismal you are making ill.

She holds for me imprinted charms
Ever since a babe in arms.


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suthern
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1 posted 2000-12-22 12:34 PM


Aw... this is great, Seymour! Thanks for sharing... and stay sentimental! *S*
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-12-22 12:38 PM


We're gonna have to change your name to Sentimental song Sy, if you keep writing like this.
It's beautiful.
Keth


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-12-22 02:46 PM


Screaming, "your a blight in the way."
My dismal you are making ill.

She holds for me imprinted charms
Ever since a babe in arms
================
and Im sure she feels the same way....
as do we ... about your poetry.  
later-adoring-dad-gator
jm *ww*

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-12-22 03:55 PM


Sy, I'd ask you to adopt me, just to get a note from you...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-12-22 06:17 PM


Suthern,
Thank you and glad you enjoyed.

Kethry,
Thank you for the nice comment.

JM,
Thank you winliewinkie.

Karilea,
I did adopt you some time ago. *L*

Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-12-22 09:21 PM


Then that must be the very reason I always feel so welcome...and I shall always thank you for this wondrous gift...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2000-12-23 09:23 AM


That's all I've got is a daughter and she's very special to me, so as a result I loved this one!  Have a nice holiday  Seymour
serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-12-23 09:43 AM


seymour, you are just so huggable! So there! (((sy))) Very heart-warming!!!
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2000-12-23 10:54 AM


Sunshine,
You are special. *L*

Ethome,
Thank you and a happy holiday to you and yours.

Serenity,
Thank you I always enjoy a hug.

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