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A Sentimental Moment
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A Sentimental Moment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A sentimental moment In a moments revelry I posted a card in whim. A cartoon a fantasy To my charming daughter Kim. It was a funny little graph And was sent as just a gift In hopes it would bring a laugh To her mood, some spirits lift. A whimsical little wile To change blue, to sunny fare And a frown to a brief smile A pun, one that we could share. It was a little caper An affectionate display And it will stay the paper To look on some other day. A cartooned Don Quixote Charging down a black windmill Screaming, "your a blight in the way." My dismal you are making ill. She holds for me imprinted charms Ever since a babe in arms. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Aw... this is great, Seymour! Thanks for sharing... and stay sentimental! *S* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
We're gonna have to change your name to Sentimental song Sy, if you keep writing like this. It's beautiful. Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Screaming, "your a blight in the way." My dismal you are making ill. She holds for me imprinted charms Ever since a babe in arms ================ and Im sure she feels the same way.... as do we ... about your poetry.  later-adoring-dad-gator jm *ww* Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I'd ask you to adopt me, just to get a note from you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you and glad you enjoyed. Kethry, Thank you for the nice comment. JM, Thank you winliewinkie. Karilea, I did adopt you some time ago. *L* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then that must be the very reason I always feel so welcome...and I shall always thank you for this wondrous gift... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's all I've got is a daughter and she's very special to me, so as a result I loved this one! Have a nice holiday Seymour |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
seymour, you are just so huggable! So there! (((sy))) Very heart-warming!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are special. *L* Ethome, Thank you and a happy holiday to you and yours. Serenity, Thank you I always enjoy a hug. |
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