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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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I never would have thought that there'd be a you and me. It wasn't plausible. It wasn't possible. How did it happen at all? But out of the star-crossed sky fell an opportunity. It was wonderful. It was special. It was magic. I "knew " you and you "knew" me There was an undeniable "connection" It made my life such a blissful state of euphoria. My eyes sparkled. My soul danced. My heart rejoiced. And I loved you so much. And now that you're gone I wish there was something in its place. I want a new dream. I want a new heart. I want to hope again.. But mostly, I'm feeling the pain of loss. I remember happy moments when we loved and laughed together and think there'll be no more. I remember little thoughts of you and sigh 'cause you're gone. I remember my contented heart and cry because now it's broken. And now it's all gone, I can't help but miss you. For every wonderful thought of you… an empty memory looms of your soulful eyes your winning smile and the sound of your voice in the dark while I lay dreaming in your arms.. And the only thing that does still remain is that I still love you.... © December 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Koko this is a great lament you've written here and your feelings saturate the entire work....star crossed lovers eh just like Romeo and Juliet...very good! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Koko...seems the ones you like the most you miss the most...James |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
yes I would say that silly humans tend to love most where they can't seem to attain. thanks to al for your kind remarks once again. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you have some great lines in your poem..i enjoyed: but out of the star crossed sky fell an opportunity for every wonderful thought of you.. an empty memory looms well said |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Koko, It's hard to move on after an exceptional relationship, you've expressed this so well! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ 'And now that you're gone I wish there was something in its place. I want a new dream. I want a new heart. I want to hope again..' Wrapped up in the heart of you is a chance for something new. I would wish you happiness in finding it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Smiles at all and thanks so much for the caring comments! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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