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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Kinetic Kismet you know that motion emotion forces of nature bounding beyond dynamics of abstract here and yon fate interwoven into energy of electric and then some don’t run oK with you I’ve heard unspoken words loud ‘cross the waves lost of save she speaks to him he to her voices ring loud and sure kinetic kismet oh so very glad they met they intertwine the words of rhyme and beatings of their hearts he stimulates her she cries he won’t lie but they hide this kinetic kismet only they know what they show in the glow of right through the night kinetic kismet don’t contest the fate can’t slow the tide chance the ride sooner than late it may end and then maybe not he’s alone she’s alone what keeps them apart from the heart wild the ride this kinetic kismet stem the tide they haven’t met except through dreams torn at seams comfort is lost what’s the cost electricity riding waves of energy abstract motion caused emotion kinetic kismet? Fate in Motion Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOWZERS!!!!!!! Now this one got me going in a million directions at once searching for that path among the stars to that spot in the light of the moon. Superbly written my friend. This one is a surely destined to be a keeper so I will. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fascinating piece! Great development on a theme! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is utterly brilliant, this is definitely one of your utter best. Did I not say you were soaring higher and higher. Wonderful love it really is. Excellant, divine and yes I do love it too Take care Majestic Marsha : Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kinetic kismet...what a wonderful phrase! sunshine, you have taken a natural occurence that happens thousands of times a day and transformed it into a brilliant and very thought-provoking piece of work...amazing!  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
now, where in the heck did you come up with such a great phrase? kinetic kismet, indeed! hmmmmm.... this whirl of words sounds like a lyrical melody and i'm all caught up in it... i am the she... you wrote my head... geesh! wonderful writing, karilea! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gee, Mark, have you found yourself yet? I haven't seen many of your Woozers, but am glad to be the recipient of one...thanks!... Virginia, you know, it didn't start out as a theme, just two words...thank you!... Marsha, one "utter best" a day ~ otherwise, I shall spoil from the praise! Thank you!... 'Deer, I like those two words too...they make a lot of sense, put together like that, don't they...or at least they do in my mind...thanks!... Doreen...no one will EVER write you...now, yes, I agree, you shall be written with, of and for...and most likely about, for you shall be the famous one my dear!...hugs to you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That IS one electrifying phrase...can't get it out of my mind...and I have felt it in motion too...a baffling thing, that you've written about most eloquently...your pen never seems to run out of ink..you ARE amazing!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one!!!! Oh it just says so much. . . that's a great phrase too!! Before you know it. . .it'll be on the lips of every one. . . Karilea, you continue to amaze and delight. . . don't stop!!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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